Present Existence

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Present Existence

I stare seemingly down
into the ancient thrashing waters.
As the young faces beneath blur
my broken face fades forever from sight,
as if taken further down to the fire.
Stuck on the sands,
on the fickle edge i lie,
not able to go on hard earth,
or into pure waters.
My wrists bleed onto the grey sand.
My blood stains the imperfect grains.
I stare at the horizon and the gleaming moon.
It's bright rays lighting the path of those who walk on earth
to the shimmering waters ahead.
And us, those who lie in wait and bleed,
are left to our solemn hopes, never fulfilled.

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KristyLoren commented on Present Existence

08-23-2009

Nicely written, I could envision the whole piece, very interesting and deep. Keep writing, you rock

cliftondurant commented on Present Existence

08-21-2009

yes tony you have talent keep up the good work thank for sharing

SilverGirl commented on Present Existence

08-16-2009

Wow.. great writing dude.. Im very impressed.. Keep up the great work!. Hugs SG

WordSlinger commented on Present Existence

07-10-2009

Awesome poem, it's the grip of life, slinginging you everywhere. grey is when you say clay, lol love this..

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

Tony’s Poems (79)

Title Comments
Title Comments
Escape 0
Simplicity 1
Unser Leben....Our Life 0
Nie...Never 0
Freedom 0
Recoil 0
Du & Me 0
Lass Uns Rennen....Let Us Run 0
Menschen...Hu
mans
0
Wiederholung.
..Repitition
0
Balance 0
Finality 1
Zusammen...To
gether
0
Für Dich....For You 1
Mein Geist....My Mind 0
Uns.....Us 0
Fall......Fal
l
0
Falschen Anschuldigung
en...False Accusations
0
Sicherheit...
Safety
0
Brech Aus...Break Out 0
Shadow 0
Cold 0
Certitude 0
Truth 0
Consciousness 0
Sacrifice 0
Two Become One 0
Sleep 0
Broken 1
Punishment 0
Reality 0
Warranted Infliction 0
Sky 1
Solitude 0
Future 0
Lies 0
Rules 1
Unavoidable 0
Empty 0
Maze 0
Alone 0
Sporadic 0
Struggle 0
Impossible 0
Ambush 0
Life's Song 0
Geh....Go 0
Nicht Mehr.......No More 0
"Gods" 1
Wonders 0
Das Ende.....The End 0
Vengance 0
Obstacle 0
Gone 0
Ewigkeit....E
ternity
0
Release 0
Hidden 2
Incapable 1
Breakdown 1
Guardian Soldiers 1
One Who Once Was 0
Creative Process 0
What Am I? 1
The Overpowering Desire 5
Spirit 1
Insanity 2
Constantly 1
Present Existence 5
Pain Inside 1
Liebe.... Love 1
Banning Books 3
Iron Man 0
What You Do 2
Someone 9
IDK 6
Deprivation 12
In Return 3
Identity 3
It 5