Presently

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    Presently






    wide open and vulnerable
    the heart frozen in fear still beats
    the love has not for a second stopped
    fear is still wrapped around me
    crying because I am afraid
    crying because I am not
    in your arms
    needing you
    needing your voice
    needing your touch
    needing all of you
    with all the fear
    all the pain
    all the crying
    to be a bad dream
    washed away by a hug
    and your smile




    © 2006 origionalmerlin





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    GuitarMomma commented on Presently

    08-15-2009

    Another good one... I love my husband this much, that I ache to be in his arms when I am not. Nice work.

    symash commented on Presently

    07-08-2009

    so heart felt and warming.. great poem !!! another 10 for you

    rosaleary2p commented on Presently

    05-25-2009

    Speaking of vulnerability and emotion with such honesty is not only original, but it is almost unheard of. The poem speaks for itself as to the message... it speaks volumes.

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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