Pressure breakdown

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    Pressure breakdown
    Just because I'm in your view
    Barrelled eyed vision
    I can see through
    Feel it around stop and stare
    Kept looking back
    Now you just dare
    Well into my maturity
    I realised that reality is good to me
    Don't need a false sense on security
    When I have secured my self
    And comfort in my identity
    Can't shape me from myself
    I don't twist to bend
    Try too and watch me
    Become ever so aware
    I'm not afraid of dreams 
    Becoming nightmares
    I'm lucidly dreaming 
    Running towards screaming
    And the people running away 
    They have been beaten
    But turning back wouldn't be freedom
    And I'm fighting
    For that I believe in
    Your nerve sends pulses
    Urges to fatigue and break down ones door
    But the mind games are wasted 
    On people that have angels 
    Wrapping them in security 
    Shielding them from the cold
    Soil that's tread filled 
    Leads back to dirty steps but out of dirt flowers do grow
    And all that your doing
    Karma cannot forget
    That tactics must too be humbly repaid
    Lies and deceit
    Love here's a receipt 
     Just because I'm in your view
    Barrelled eyed vision
    I can see through
    Feel it around stop and stare
    Kept looking back
    Now you just dare
    pack mentality
    ruthless without care 
    Well into my maturity
    I realised that reality is good to me
    Don't need a false sense on security
    When I have secured my self
    And comfort in my identity
    Can't shape me from myself
    I don't twist to bend
    Try too and watch me
    Become ever so aware
    I'm not afraid of dreams 
    Becoming nightmares
    I'm lucidly dreaming 
    Running towards screaming
    And the people running away 
    They have been beaten
    But turning back wouldn't be freedom
    And I'm fighting
    For that I believe in
    Your nerve sends pulses 
    Urges to fatigue and break down ones door 
    But the mind games are wasted 
    On people that have angels 
    Wrapping them in security 
    Shielding them from the cold
    Soil that's tread filled 
    Leads back to dirty steps but out of dirt flowers do grow 
    And all that your doing
    Karma cannot forget
    That tactics must too be humbly repaid
    Lies and deceit
    Love here's a receipt 

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    windsongs commented on Pressure breakdown

    05-18-2014

    through the clouds appears a rainbow.........................................good write :)
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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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