pressure drive

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    pressure drive

    pressure drive

    seeking clues
    from other faces
    to solve the riddle
    of my empty spaces
    my words have no meaning
    no thought no consequence
    no wistful leaning
    stories that i can't tell
    from all the dead end roads that lead to hell
    shadows of dark shadows
    fill up my mind
    pressure drive pushing
    to the edge of time
    please push the darkness
    into that black hole 
    that arc that separates
    earth and space
    body and soul
    it has always been
    it is what i abide
    pressure drive
    from inside
    no rhyme nor reason i can find
    just this constant pleading
    from my mind
    please slow down
    the pressure drive

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    Teardrops commented on pressure drive

    02-02-2011

    This reminds me of time running out and we still dont know what we are here for . Slow down you have plenty of time just take it one day at a time Marie

    wiskeygirl5090 commented on pressure drive

    01-31-2011

    i really like this poem ........ i often find myself consumed with the presures of life and i often forget that i've got to slow down very good read thanks for sharing.

    train64

    02/01/2011

    Thank you for the kind words WG.

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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