Pretty Perfect Memories

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    Pretty Perfect Memories

    Pretty perfect memories

     A trend now forgotten.

    Possibilities persuaded

    By a few moments stolen.

     

    Beauty bathed in intrigue

    A time now misplaced.

    Borrowed beacons

    Carried to another place.

     

    Miracles misted vaguely

    With divine gifted hands .

    Manufactured memoirs

    Stored throughout times sand.

     

    Hearts herald a past

    With arms held open.

    Humbly healing

    On a fresh course chosen.

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    kdarcy commented on Pretty Perfect Memories

    11-21-2010

    Saved to my favs, an excellent write, loved all the lines. I read just the last line in each stanza by themselves when I completed the whole read ... awesome, well done k
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    jamie7121f

    11/30/2010

    Thank You! I really enjoyed writing this one. I think it's one of my favs to. Glad you enjoyed it :)

    RPT40 commented on Pretty Perfect Memories

    10-22-2010

    I love the way this reads aloud. This is one of my favorites of yours. Nice write.
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    jamie7121f

    10/22/2010

    Thank you:) It was a fun one. I enjoyed writing it.

    arronpalmer commented on Pretty Perfect Memories

    10-18-2010

    As Olan comments, the structure present in this poem is sublime. From alliteration per stanza, to two-alliterated-word third lines per stanza, to assonance. oh, and the actual content ain't too shabby either! Great piece, nice to see someone doing something a little different. Keep it up!
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    jamie7121f

    10/18/2010

    Thank You : )

    Olan01 commented on Pretty Perfect Memories

    10-17-2010

    I like this alliteration poem with different consonants used for each stanza. This shows that you have a creative mind wanting to expand her poetry skills. Good job. Olan
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    jamie7121f

    10/17/2010

    Thank you :) This came to me while waiting for a bus to pick up some children. I actually had to rush home and write it down. lol

    kkirkwood commented on Pretty Perfect Memories

    10-14-2010

    Memories of my true friend always amaze me when I realized how blessed I am to have them always a part of my life.
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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