-Preying-

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    -Preying-

    This morning I with the cat was
    Steeped, at the top in a wide stairway
    Though struck us both in the same gaze barely

    One was gifted to say whatever knew he
    To be the solitary buzz

    But a nod, the winking cats can
    Or the stay that man does
    When morning sticks to him or causes him

    To lift his morning glass
    To the eyes his sun creaks

    Oh, mellow, sinister gatherer I
    Beg of you, cease

    Your peculiar stopping watch upon us
    Before someone breaks
    Before we stop our looking watches..

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    NativeAmeriGirl commented on -Preying-

    09-07-2010

    Mucho muy bien, smile!!!! You have a very unusual way of poetry, that is very brilliantly tantilizing to the emotions and flows with a profoundness that has left me in awe as well as have touched that very part of my hearts soul, that is left only for poetry......Muchas gracias for such a treat......siempre, Native

    ihavewings22

    09/09/2010

    Wow! Thank you so very much for your comment... You have made my day with what you said!

    NativeAmeriGirl

    09/27/2010

    De nada my friend....it was my pleasure and I was truly honored to do so, smile, to God be all the Glory.....siempre, Native

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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