Prison Break

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Prison Break

I'm locked up, sitting here waiting till you let me go.
My love for you is so great, indescribable.
I have these shackles bonded on my wrists,
surrounded by four stone walls.

I miss you, I feel burned up and dead with out your love,
   
Tu me haces falta

I cry out for you, for your return.
I love you, I pray each night for you wishing to see you.
My heart can't take this pain no more,
from being arrested from your love.

Everyday, every night,
staring at a stone wall,
thinking about you,
your smile,
your eyes,
your laugh,
YOU!

I can't eat nor sleep with this pain,
it's as if someone stabbed my heart.
But my heart still aches,
It hurts me,
it hurts you.

I admit I miss you and I admit that the things came out rough in the past, but this can't continue like this.
All the pain, my heart swells up like a balloon.
As time pass, my heart gets so big it pops, it explodes of so much pain.
To be away from you.
I love you, you love me.

te extrano

te quiero mucho!
I love you!

no te olvides te me, nunca mi amorcito lindo.

I'm locked up, waiting for you,
in your prison break.

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dahlusion commented on Prison Break

10-25-2009

"I miss you, I feel burned up and dead with out your love" — one of the most masterful love lines ever written. I am in awe over this poem and your powerful, poetic talent.

Dreamer123

11/06/2009

awwwwwwwwwwwwwww thank you so much. I'm trying to make another poem but i can't think of any. but I will no worries. Anyway, thank you so much for commenting. your too kind.

Plot121 commented on Prison Break

07-31-2009

for a love poem it has all the stucture and the flow but I think the title throws the whole thing off or seems misleading but thats my opinion. Robert...

Dreamer123

07/31/2009

Thanks for the comment. But the title doesn't mislead the poem it's not about a chrush or a guy i like. it's about someone who's been there for me but been apart.

Dreamer123

07/31/2009

Thank you very much. :D God bless you

cynthiakehl commented on Prison Break

07-27-2009

l enjoyed the analogy of love and prison,...great write!

Dreamer123

07/28/2009

Thanks alot cynthia you rock :D thanks for everything. :D God bless

christliked commented on Prison Break

07-26-2009

YOU MAKE ME MISS SOMEONE SPECIAL AND I UNDERSTAND THE WAY THAT YOU FEEL

Dreamer123

07/26/2009

Thank you very much for understanding and i lov your poetry as well it impacts me thank you very much. God Bless.

cliftondurant commented on Prison Break

07-24-2009

A beautful love poem are you only 12 this is a heart crying out for love lovely poem thanks for sharing

Dreamer123

07/24/2009

thank you very much clift. thanks for advice and comments god bless you

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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