Prisoner of his state of mind

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    Prisoner of his state of mind

    Another song in the key of Dm

    A tear fell from Heavens eye
    On a young man barely getting by
    He looked up above then looked to the ground
    A puddle of blues was all he found
    Started him thinkin` about the way it was
    Like to change if he only could
    Dreams he had, of long ago
    Never led him to his pot of gold

    The life he shared, and the love he gave
    Never was enough to get him saved
    Lost his family and lost his friends
    Never to return again
    Under the spell of the devils gun
    Nowhere to hide, it’s in his blood
    He’d like to run, but can’t go far
    Imprisoned by self-inflicted bars

    Chorus:
    Prisoner of his state of mind, as dreams fell from his clouded eyes
    It’s hard to stand when you’re on your knees,
    Through bloodshot eyes – you just can’t see
    It’s all been wasted time, he’s a prisoner of his state of mind

    Can’t break free he’s just doing time
    Another shot from the needle, a senseless crime
    Round and round it never ends
    Never stops it just starts again
    From the heated spoon, to the tremblin` arm
    He never could understand the harm
    Now he looks in the mirror and sees someone
    Under the spell of the devils gun

    Chorus:

    Bridge:
    Another tear fell from Heavens eye
    On a young man, who finally died
    Couldn’t live with one foot in the ground
    Another lost soul – who couldn’t be found

    Chorus:

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    Kanicki commented on Prisoner of his state of mind

    11-06-2010

    WOW Powerful Bravo great write; I love to hear you sing this one! Peace, Light and Love

    ArgusWayne commented on Prisoner of his state of mind

    03-13-2010

    Great song about a tough story! Reminds me of a friend of mine who went down that dark road.

    danmartyjake1 commented on Prisoner of his state of mind

    09-13-2009

    Very beautifully written sad account that we all understand is a merciless situation many souls experience on this plane. poignant and soulful......... sort of reminds me a little of the "Don't You Know That You Are A Shooting Star" song about Johnny..... very creative words from you, thank you.

    NevillePark commented on Prisoner of his state of mind

    09-13-2009

    And you can add alcohol to the top of the list as well songwriter. I have the memory of a jazz guitarist friend wasting away and finally dying of emphysema. He insisted that of all the chemicals to be able to quit (He didum all), he said alcohol was what did him in.

    NevillePark

    09/13/2009

    I have one on love,the quest for fame, and a set of works that never took a break. "The Killer Passion"

    laydbak1 commented on Prisoner of his state of mind

    07-24-2009

    Drugs - the Devil's nectar... Always a sad thing when a hapless soul takes their first sip, and never again wakes up in the real world... Until it's all over and done... Good write

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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