P.R.M *Please Rescue Me

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this was writting Oct.16,2009 @ 7:14 pm

P.R.M *Please Rescue Me

In my face you can see the pain
You can see the tears on my face...the dry areas from
                    my tears
In my face you see the useless emotions that I
                     keep tryna hide inside
You can see the fear in my eyes..of being alone
                      on earth

 But all of that shit don't matter if you can't feel
                     the pain
None of that shit matters if you don;t stop
                      the tears form falling
Don't none of these emotions touch you if you
        look at me and don't feel a damn thing
You see my fear of loniness, but you can't do shyt
                  for me or shyt about it

So please rescue me..from living give it to me
                like a real mutha fu*ka
hand me the A-K 47 or the windchester shotgun
And get out of my way "next time "don't waist my time telling me
you feel my pain, you understand myhurt, because you really don't ..if you did then you would feel this bullet !!
                         Rescue Me

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daniel081180 commented on P.R.M *Please Rescue Me

12-28-2009

I will rescue you my love. Never have to worry again. No more loneliness, no more sleepless nights. I will make you happy forever or die trying... I love you.

HiddenAngel

12/28/2009

i am happy with u ...now

stever commented on P.R.M *Please Rescue Me

12-28-2009

lot of emotion in this poem ..i do feel the pain in these words..just write it tho..no shootin...

HiddenAngel

12/28/2009

lol thank you somuch 4 yur understnadin to my poems..and for takein the time out to comment to them..the shooting is just some thing most people would do so i added that at the end but I personally dnt use guns unless im hunting..

Phoenix9 commented on P.R.M *Please Rescue Me

12-28-2009

I know we all need rescue some times, Pain, loneliness is not a way to live, you can only hide so much, yet all can be seen if one can only see what is in the eyes, for there is truth in the windows of your soul. great write, PHOENIX

HiddenAngel

12/28/2009

thnak you very much for takein the time to read and comment on y poems it is very much so appreciated by me ..God bless

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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