Progression of Life

4 Comments

Tags:
  • Love
    • ,
  • Emotional
    • ,
  • Death
    • PandoraBox
    • is lost in thoughtlessness of actions

    Poem Commentary

    This is about myself and how I connect with my fianece and how i feel about life in general.

    Progression of Life

    Frustration of the heart and mind

    Sends turmoil to the stomach

    And life goes on, the music plays

    Until you hit rewind.

    The thought of what we could be

    Sends my heart off on a race

    And the rain comes down, the winds they howl

    Across the storming sea.

    Our pasts are filled with pain

    That breaks the others heart

    And the sun comes out, the rays shine down

    The times we meet again.

    The future’s unclear

    The past is over, we’re stuck in the present now

    And then life stops, the music ends

    There’s no one left to hear.

    Poem Comments

    (4)

    Please login or register

    You must be logged in or register a new account in order to
    leave comments/feedback and rate this poem.

    Login or Register

    photochick commented on Progression of Life

    09-11-2009

    nice hidden message withing your words very intriguing poem nice flow as well
    Reply to Comment

    Singcanary commented on Progression of Life

    09-09-2009

    Life is cyclical filled with all its moods. I felt the seasons of living in your poem. Its uncertainties, sorrows and its hope from the sun's rays. Well done!
    Reply to Comment

    Ray37342 commented on Progression of Life

    09-09-2009

    Interesting, honestly I felt some feeling behind this one, but it kind of felt like it was muted to me. All in all, it was pretty good.
    Reply to Comment

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

    PandoraBox’s Poems (25)

    Title Comments Submitted
    Title Comments Submitted
    Progression of Life 4 09/09/2009
    Never Forget 0 09/09/2009
    Muse 0 09/09/2009
    Betrayed 0 09/09/2009
    Dad 1 09/09/2009
    The Day I Lost You 1 09/09/2009
    Everytime 1 09/09/2009
    Falling 0 09/09/2009
    n/a 0 09/09/2009
    Life's Lessons 1 09/09/2009
    Light 0 09/09/2009
    My Emo Poem 0 09/10/2009
    Over It 0 09/09/2009
    Perceptions 0 09/09/2009
    Silence 0 09/09/2009
    Sleep & Wake 0 09/09/2009
    I Lost You 0 09/09/2009
    Darkness 0 09/09/2009
    n/a 0 09/09/2009
    Victory 0 09/09/2009
    Breath 0 09/09/2009
    Lost to Yourself 0 09/09/2009
    Anxiety 0 09/09/2009
    Isolation 0 09/09/2009
    Waiting 0 09/09/2009
    Top of Page