Progression of Life


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This is about myself and how I connect with my fianece and how i feel about life in general.

Progression of Life

Frustration of the heart and mind

Sends turmoil to the stomach

And life goes on, the music plays

Until you hit rewind.

The thought of what we could be

Sends my heart off on a race

And the rain comes down, the winds they howl

Across the storming sea.

Our pasts are filled with pain

That breaks the others heart

And the sun comes out, the rays shine down

The times we meet again.

The future’s unclear

The past is over, we’re stuck in the present now

And then life stops, the music ends

There’s no one left to hear.

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photochick commented on Progression of Life


nice hidden message withing your words very intriguing poem nice flow as well

Singcanary commented on Progression of Life


Life is cyclical filled with all its moods. I felt the seasons of living in your poem. Its uncertainties, sorrows and its hope from the sun's rays. Well done!

Ray37342 commented on Progression of Life


Interesting, honestly I felt some feeling behind this one, but it kind of felt like it was muted to me. All in all, it was pretty good.

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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Progression of Life 4
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n/a 0
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