Project1, Moods of Blue

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    • hannahxP
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    starting a prject for testing out my skillz =p just trying out some old english words mixed with alot of modern.

    Project1, Moods of Blue

    Who could define your beauty?

                    Even those who behold you within an arm’s reach?

    Could not your beauty beseech a glance?

                    Into an apple-of-your-eye type romance?

    Could a sea shell found in a vast sea to reveal its treasures only to thee,

                    Win your love? Maybe a diamond cut free from its rocky cave?

    Perhaps only a heart cut free, could steal a slice of love from thee.

    A worthy sacrifice for such a boundless prize I’m sure.

    But, would my heart be good enough? Or would you lose me’

                    In the moods of vast azure.

    Could such a sacrifice, so pure, be so very lost,

     In a mood not so pure?

    Forever lost… defenselessly in a mood of azure?

                    Of such a mood, there is no cure.  

     

    I have been warned, I’m sure impartially,

                    I give you my heart disregarding the hazard.

    I just hope my heart is enough to win love from thee,

                    Just don’t leave my heart all tattered.

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    aysha commented on Project1, Moods of Blue

    02-26-2011

    I really like this one. Its my favorite so far. Very descriptive, very insightful.

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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