promise

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  • Lost Love
    • LadyLourdes
    • is trying to keep my sanity in this unpatient world!

    promise

    Enough of all the drama
    It’s painful enough to see you go
    But to hear you spit your twisted spitefulness
    Is quite dangerous to a broken heart
    Damn if only the stars shined their spark of hope on me

    Fear is paralyzing me to break free
    Desperately trying to take over the future
    A winding blinding road with seemingly no end
    All control is left to the will to keep what is not meant to be
    The end is a promise of new memories

    Time must pass and will tell all that is to be
    The suffering will end but not today
    Today we fight for our sanity
    Our rights are not to be given or taken
    They are ours to keep and maintain
    Damn those who try to take true love in vain
    For they too will pay
    In ways my heart yearns to see
    And if not then let them see me!


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    kdarcy commented on promise

    05-09-2009

    Some great lines and combos, keep it up

    LadyLourdes

    06/17/2009

    thx i will...it's been a while i've been so busy but i will start writing again this time they will be happier lol

    prophesy commented on promise

    01-31-2009

    oh dear love, how do i feel so deeply much, an ocean can tell of mine tears. (for nothing shall last but god).

    rollerderby commented on promise

    12-31-2008

    well done dear! Sorry your pen had to write such a painful poem, but we all have our scars. Thanks for sharing.

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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