Prosper A Fate

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    • christianprep
    • done with my study it was hard now my poem is published its called Prayer Study and Poem

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    Yes i Know what Prosper means but in poetry you can use words to mean something else? thats part of what makes it poetic am i right sometimes it gives it a little juce and makes u question what its suppose to mean because in here its decribed to be prosper good or evil.. what kind of fate to u want to have heaven or hell prittly much is what its saying

    Prosper A Fate

    How Long will you prosper this fate, as we all lie in wait

    the Lord will rain one day, as you all fall to fate

    time is running the clock is ticking,

    as people live, they die

    some with a horrible fate,

    others who will prosper a good fate

     

    I watch my friends and I wander, will they have a good fate,

    what kind of life shall they live?

    will they join the military, be an artist, or a bum, will they lead good lives,

    When will my parents be taken from me, to live in a better place,

    when will that be my fate

    when will the world just end,

    when will God return to earth, and claim is thrown

    What would happen if i don't speak out

    Will I live in heaven in shame, because It will reflect back?

     

    How Long will you prosper this fate, as we all lie in wait

    the Lord will rain one day, as you all fall to fate

    time is running the clock is ticking

    as people live, they die

    some with a horrible fate,

    others who will prosper a good fate

     

     

     

     

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    winterkou commented on Prosper A Fate

    10-25-2010

    good poem, you put thrown( its throne) but one small spelling error does not take away from the nice message this poem speaks
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    christianprep

    10/31/2010

    Thank you So much ill fix that when i can

    Sydney commented on Prosper A Fate

    10-22-2010

    this is a good poem. very thought provoking. Sydney
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    christianprep

    10/31/2010

    that it is ment to be.... thank you... my step mom and friends tell me that too.... i agree it is... thanks again... (prep)

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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