Proud of Place

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    Proud of Place

    Proud of Place

     

     

    Allowing me to run free

    in an open field with

    warm, long green grasses

    under my hooves

     

    Eagle overhead, we race,

    I want to win -

    my heart pounding

    against my chest

     

    I follow the eagle

    into the canyon,

    my hooves pound

    against the hard dirt

     

    I race the eagle

    hearing my hooves

    against the stones

    drives me on to win

     

    I love you for

    allowing me to run free

    to my wild place,

    with you riding bareback.

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    knight4696 commented on Proud of Place

    02-06-2010

    I have to agree with Insideme - You certainly have a way with combining the animal and spirit - Great Job! :) Ken

    Insideme commented on Proud of Place

    02-05-2010

    I love how you put yourself into this piece, it is from animals that we find our own spirit. I love it.

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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