Prudence my Dear

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    • Sx9
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    so life can bless you with the vibes of yesterdays when only kindergarten and loving someone like it was 1968 or may be 69,hoping that in time this is how it will turn out to be,without the pain and heart ache of grown up just sit here and chill and never grow old and so me and Prudence was always them two who never apart,and so the story say only for a moment and it felt like a life time,,walk good..

    Prudence my Dear

    I come to you with open arms,

    intended for us to merge as one.

    but you were so shy,you let me

    have it in the eye.....

    my mother say its a lie,

    that you would never die,

    but yes you passed without a sigh .

    twisted curves washes my brow

    and in time we will know,

    just how faith should have mold us into

    man and wife,in our twilight days,

    must not let you go, for tears will

    never sees to flow,school day play

    mom would always say,only to find us

    kissing hand in hand walking home from church..

    passing cart would alway slow,hitching a ride

    we skip and fro,flinging books from hills to lawns,

    dancing though nature with utmost rhyme,picking

    petals as we go,sharing everything beauty can unfold,

    so  the story unfold, the first time we met and I gave you my hand

    in return for you love that was way back then

    during the dreams of last April rain, for we are children of the

    order and will not defied the will of playing games,

    you were my partner in ring around the roses

    could not take my eyes off you,even when I run in

    and you was just marching around the ring,in daze

    and awe you were my girl,,

    I will never cry,for you will ever be,

     thats how I will remember you, long after

    the rain,thunder and blunder you make,by hurting my eyes....

     

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    abuelita1 commented on Prudence my Dear

    11-20-2010

    I loved this! I saw a celebration of love and life, as we should celebrate life, and all that comes with it!

    Sx9

    11/20/2010

    true true,,thanks,,

    duty commented on Prudence my Dear

    11-04-2010

    Your great pen is a blessing....And the reader can plainly see...With the rising of each sun....We know naught whats to be...

    dahlusion commented on Prudence my Dear

    11-04-2010

    This is the most poetic sadness I have read in awhile. You have taken melancholy to the level of art and joy. BRAVO!!!!!!! Peace and Light, dah

    stefy commented on Prudence my Dear

    11-04-2010

    An amazing poem.....the flow is wonderful.....so sorry for your grief....i have felt that so strong here...

    REGINA2 commented on Prudence my Dear

    11-02-2010

    SX9, I am very sorry for your loss. A very sad and beautiful poem. You must have loved her very much.

    Sx9

    11/02/2010

    don't be we celebrate the joy of life,,thanks R2..

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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