p.s. dreaming of you

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    p.s. dreaming of you

    a smile crept into view
    as my headlights were set on you
    as it eased its way across

    suddenly i was struck by loss
    nothing left to remind me
    ,only you and i cannot find thee
    agony ,is the name of my past

    in its return i breath at last
    taking in your essence and life
    holding my hopes way up high
    the smile crept out of view
    as i drove further away from you
    in a moment of brief solitude
    abruptly interrupted by attitude
    much like love but never a sweet
    ill dream of uniting until we meet
    sweet thang think of me too
    p.s. dreaming of you


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    lonewolf commented on p.s. dreaming of you

    11-08-2009

    so far this is your best one. its really good. keep working hard at it and ggod results will happen

    pagaa commented on p.s. dreaming of you

    02-06-2009

    now i know why people stole your work.

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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