Purity
in the heat of the flame
impurities melt away like candle wax
leaving only the purest gold
Purity
5 Comments
Tags: 20 Words Or Less
- zorbica
- is truly grateful for amazing cyber-poet friends and their artistic expressions ~
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01/07/2010
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11-26-2009
- flames leaves no trace, melts away imperfections like fine gold the purest of it 's kind reflexing the image of the most high Okay this one is 22 words, I sure I can get it at 20 and under, can u follow...........Infiniti
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12/11/2009
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11-26-2009
- Hey Zorbica thanks for comig out to play :) I just found this piece and u know I like so I must check out the others. Infiniti
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12/11/2009
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knight4696 commented on Purity
11-12-2009
- Nice Job Zorbica! This is damn good! I like what you convey in this one! Great Job! Ken
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11/12/2009
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dancinghawk commented on Purity
11-12-2009
- amen ... physics applied to all, not least the humans among us ... nice post, Zorbica!
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11/12/2009
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