Quest of Consensus From The Years of Years

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    Quest of Consensus From The Years of Years

    I painted the wall of my thought
    Mixing the colours to get decorated it
    One after another of creativity, gave me relax
    Good grinding afterwards for good output to get.

    My garden with varieties of flowers
    Smelling with different taste
    The taste of smell and the colours of thoughts
    Both were empowering me to be fully refreshed.

    The sensation a purifying machine
    Nothing at all giving bad perception
    The door of fate to be opened with the keys
    Understanding the wishes of the creature.

    No one knows anything afterwards after this
    The present which is in hand to perform
    That's why, it is needed to decorate
    Symphony of Recording in mind how much is musical?

    The vein and neurons and the connections
    To reach up to the central mechanism
    A proper location of giving orders the same to all
    Source of making consensus from the years of years.





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    rougepriest commented on Quest of Consensus From The Years of Years

    10-04-2009

    I liked this poem best kamal, it has intrigue and clarity if not a bit redundant in spots though that line (l4) was my favorite line of your poem.pretty cool all in all.

    kamaldahal

    10/07/2009

    Thanks a lot rougepriest for your comment. I have been guided from your some of suggesting idea. I hope I will receive much and much your likeness of my writing and suggestion for correction too. Thanks and regards, Kamal

    Artie commented on Quest of Consensus From The Years of Years

    06-05-2009

    This poem paints a beautiful picture in my mind. (I got it right that time lol)---------------------

    kamaldahal

    10/07/2009

    Thank you Artie for giving comment to my poem. I feel little successful at least I could give something for which you appreciated. Thanks and regards, Kamal

    Artie commented on Quest of Consensus From The Years of Years

    06-05-2009

    I love how you describe creating your thoughts like painting a wall. This poem paints a beautiful in my mind.

    patricialouise commented on Quest of Consensus From The Years of Years

    06-05-2009

    Thought provoking. I love to read what makes me think, what makes me feel. I will read this more than one time. I do like it alot.

    kamaldahal

    10/07/2009

    Dear Patricia, what a comment you have given I could not control with happiness, whatever I say to praise you words will be less. Regards, Kamal

    ladydraeko commented on Quest of Consensus From The Years of Years

    06-03-2009

    i like this poem, the imagery is beautiful. I see depth in this poem and hope you continue writing so i can see what comes next!! HUGS

    kamaldahal

    10/07/2009

    Dear Ladydraeko, thanks for your appreciation for my writing. I hope I will write more and more taking in mind your interest and just see my another I have posted sometime before. Hope you will like and surely I feel myself my friend like you liked my poem. Kamal

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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