Questionable Emotion

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Questionable Emotion

Questionable emotion...
Is there really any devotion?
Or is this just some distracting commotion?
Or maybe it’s everlasting like the ocean.

I look into your eyes,
And they speak words so conspicuous,
But the message is ill-defined.
The words are so ambiguous.

First they say, “I love you”,
A message so endearing.
Then, I see confusion and block it
Because that’s the message I’m fearing.

Questionable emotion...
Is there really any devotion?
Or is this just some distracting commotion?
Or maybe it’s everlasting like the ocean.

We lie in each other’s arms,
Glimpsing at one another’s effervescent smiles.
We profess our love for one another.
The emotions could run on for miles.

Then, comes the argument.
Both of our minds begin to wander.
Is this really meant to be?
Or are we fooling ourselves? We ponder.

Questionable emotion...
Is there really any devotion?
Or is this just some distracting commotion?
Or maybe it’s everlasting like the ocean.

Sometimes, we’re forced to choose.
Who’ll hurt this time? Me or you?
How’ll this disagreement end?
How’ll the next one begin?

We have a love that does more than just suffice.
We love each other, so we sacrifice.
Sometimes loving each other hurts so we embale.
So is it anger or love that causes our hearts to swell?

Questionable emotion...
Is there really any devotion?
Or is this just some distracting commotion?
Or maybe it’s everlasting like the ocean.

The only way to find out is to let the love grow,
Or let the pain continue and see where it goes.
And when enough is enough
And soon becomes too much
Listen to a kiss’s message.
That message will either say nothing or too much.

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christliked commented on Questionable Emotion

11-02-2009

From bwords to lyrics and verbs to adverbs to seek to make one react and I have been infected by your work keep it up good job

MsHangtime

11/05/2009

thanks u

Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

MsHangtime’s Poems (34)

Title Comments
Title Comments
Seriously? 4
Questionable Emotion 1
Would You... (Play Me A Song...) 1
Only Everyday... 2
Look Up 1
The Crash (Rejection) 4
Let's Not Do This Again 1
It's Hard... 1
In Due Time 0
In My Dreams (My Man Has...) 1
Today, I Feel Strong 2
How Easily We Forget 1
Love Is A Choice 0
Done With The Game 1
Love Kills 0
The So-Called "Playa" 0
Bibolotti 0
Greed 0
Fake 0
1 + 1 = 2 3
Losing My Mind 0
Missing In Action 0
Sex... 0
A Good Friend 0
Whisper 0
A New Start 0
Secrets/ Crush 3
I Don't Want To Hurt Him 0
The Other Guy 0
Ain't It Funny? 0
No Matter What 1
Differences/ Changes 0
Cycles 2
Gone With The Birds 3