Questions [ 11/14/09 ]


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November 14, 2009 "This guy inspired me to write this tonight; seeing as how I feel like I am falling for him but I do not want to fall to hard because I never know what's around the corner. "But sometimes when your living on the edge don't jump just walk away with a smile" A friend once told me. I trust that judgement very closely."

Questions [ 11/14/09 ]

Can you see it in my eyes?

As I cry myself to sleep.

Can you see the pain I’m holding back?

The words I can’t ever say?


Do you know what you mean to me?

Can you tell me that there’s nothing between us?

Do you think that you could be the one for me?

Do you think that there’s nothing ever coming back?


Can I tell you one thing?

Can I show you how I feel?

Can you understand my pain?

Can you feel how hard this is on me?


I don’t want everything to fall.

I don’t want to lose you like I have everything else.

But there’s something about you,

Something I’m trying to hold onto.


You’re different,

I can see it in your eyes.

As you look at me like that,

I feel like I belong, I feel like something I haven’t for so long.


Why is it that when I look at you

I feel like everything I’ve never been, everything I’ve wanted to be?

How is it that one person can hurt me so deep and not even realize it?

How is it that that person’s you?


Why do you care for me so much?

Why do you act like you can’t live without me when I know you can?

Why are you treating me like I’m your everything when you deserve much better?

Who are you to love me and why are you here to do it?


I’m nothing, I mean not a thing.

But with you I feel like I mean everything.

Who are you to me?

Why do your words pierce me so deep?


How can I live without you since I’ve found you?

I need you in my life but you wouldn’t understand.

I’ve been trying not to fall, to keep my feet on the ground.

I’m holding onto something strong to keep me balanced as I look at you.


Please don’t hurt me like so many others’s have.

Please be my one true love

Please be my everything

Please never say forever, forever is the word that begins with goodbye.

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Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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