Quicksand

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Quicksand

Earthquakes, fires, and floods came
I'd like to understand
Why disasters come and go
And things get out of hand

Unexpected incidents
Guess I was not prepared
To try to weather the storms
So my heart was not spared

Suffering a broken heart
A mind that went insane
All I lost had a great cost
Upon my fragile brain

My foundation became weak
And I have also found
Where I stood was shifting sand
And very shaky ground

Like I'm sinking in quicksand
Help me, toss me a rope!
I need to get out of here
Before I lose all hope

There's no time for asking why
Or dwelling on the past
All I care about right now
Is that you help me fast

Lately I've been dependent
On you to rescue me
And on others who've been there
To quell anxiety

I just want to thank you all
For coming to my aid
You have helped my sanity
When I was so afraid

In a way you saved my life
Rescued me from that pit
From that sand, you grabbed my hand
And I'm not hurt one bit 

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lisaner commented on Quicksand

09-28-2012

This is excellent! Great rhymes and rythym, a very disciplined narrative. 10

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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