Quiet winter

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    This came from ending scene of Kill Bill volume one. I took the background setting and thought to talk about it a bit. :)

    Quiet winter

    Quiet Winter:   9 Lines


    Snow falling in its quiet dance,
    It's friend the flakes go and prance,
    His brother the cold, roams with furry,
    But not as much as his cousin, wind, chilling blurry,
    They Combine to make a harsh reality a peaceful serene,
    Because all this takes place in the backyard of a Japanese man's house, who swords are supreme,
    And  in his garden whitened clean,
    Flows crystal water in a winter's stream.

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    NacolleMarie commented on Quiet winter

    06-09-2010

    ohh i like this one very much,....you have alot of work posted I shall read more soon!

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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