"Beautiful Death"

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    • TheAngelOfDeath
    • Posted a new poem first time is a few years check it out its a draft as of right now ill fix the spelling and stuff when I have time

    Poem Commentary

    This poem is about how a person no matter how big or small can have one little incident turn something beautiful into something bad.
    Or vice-versa...

    Just and the petal (me) had everything going for him at one point.
    Then his life got completly turned around by an event.

    But on the other hand....

    (Me) Just by having friends turned my life around to get me back on track after it happend.

    ( This poem is dedicated to a fellow friend and poet who has inspired me to continue writing through my troubled times.)

    Thank you beautifuldeath

    Your friend and fellow poet
    Grim

    "Beautiful Death"

    "Beautiful Death"

    ..A petal..
    ..Floating on still water..
    ..The soft touch of a breeze caresses the petal into motion..
    ..Ripples in the water pulsate in a circular pattern around the petal..

    ..Out of nowhere a tiny speck lands on the petal..
    ..Causing the petal to sink into the abyss..

    ..Cold and alone the petal rots on the river bed..

    ..Forever Gone..

    ..Forever Dead..

    "What a Beautiful Death"

    A poem by: TheAngelOfDeath

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    papapaczki commented on "Beautiful Death"

    08-31-2009

    This is real good. I like how you took a petal peacefully floating down the river, and showed how fragile it can be. Very nicely done.

    JadedJezzabel commented on "Beautiful Death"

    07-01-2009

    an emotional lyrical honest portrayal of sinking into the abyss of infinate sadness

    beautifuldeath commented on "Beautiful Death"

    07-01-2009

    I cannot begin to thank you enough. This piece was amazing. I fear I am begining to sound like a broken record. The imagery was devine and the emotions were heartfelt. I envy you now...although I kinda think I always have. Your writing is beyond comparison. Loved it. 10 from me

    TheAngelOfDeath

    07/02/2009

    I hope you liked it. I put my heart and soul in this poem. Just for you. And no you shouldnt thank me i should thnx you. and I will again. Thank you. Your freind Grim.

    sk8ergirl commented on "Beautiful Death"

    07-01-2009

    wow that was very emotional i liked the metaphors

    Romano commented on "Beautiful Death"

    06-30-2009

    swifting softly like a whisper......................................................................

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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