"BELIEVE IT OR NOT"

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    "BELIEVE IT OR NOT"

     "WORDS" WROTE ON PAPER, MEAN NOTHING TO SOME,
    IF THEY ONLY KNEW,,,OF WHAT COULD BECOME.
    IT CALMS DOWN "STRESS" AND THE "DRAMA" WILL THIN,
    TRUST ME MY FRIEND,,,YOU'LL WRITE ONE AGAIN!

    THE "DREAMS"THAT YOU WISHED FOR,CAN "COME TRUE" IN A "POEM",
    THE "FANTASYS" YOU HOPE FOR? "THEY'RE" THERE AT YOUR HOME!

    FINANCIALLY STRUGGLING? IN AN INSTANT, YOUR'RE "RICH!"
    AND THE "SECRETS" YOU HAVE?
    IN A "POEM" THERE'S "NO SNITCH"!

    IT'S LIKE WRITING A "JOURNAL", JUST GIVE IT SOME "RHYME"!
    MOST CAN COME TO YOU,,,,,,SOME TAKE SOME TIME.
    IT'S LIKE "DRIFTING" AWAY,,,,,BUT YOUR'RE STILL THERE AT HOME!
    THAT'S WHY YOU SHOULD "WRITE",IN A PLACE LIKE YOUR "DOME".

    YOU'RE THINKING I'M "CRAZY", AND LAUGH AT THE THOUGHT!
    "MY POEMS" ARE ACTUALLY, THE REASON I FOUGHT!
    JUST KEEPING IT "BOTTLED" AND NOT TELL A SOUL,
    YOU'LL "REALISE" ALL YOUR "TENSIONS"
    THAT'S STOPPING YOUR "GOAL".

    WHEN "FEELING" YOU'RE "LONELY",,THERE'S NO ONE AROUND,
    JUST PICK UP THAT "PEN"! IN A ROOM WITH NO SOUND!

    "MY FAVORITE" SPOT, IS DOWN BY THE "CREEK",
    THE "SOUNDS"OF "NATURE",GIVE ME "WORDS" THAT I SEEK.


    AS I "QUOTED" AT THE BEGINNING" , THIS "POEM" WROTE TODAY
    THERE'S ALL KINDS OF "POEMS",,,,,,,JUST "FEEL" WHAT YOU SAY!
    JUST "RELAX" AND "RELEASE" ALL THAT'S "BEATING" ON YOU,
    "GO BACK" AND "PROOF READ" THESE "WORDS" CAME FROM YOU!

    THEN "YOU'LL" SEE HOW "POEMS"     HELP YOU TO "COPE"
    FOR WHEN YOU JUST STARTED, AND JUST GIVE UP "HOPE"!
    "POEMS" ARE LIKE "PUZZLES", THE PIECES" NEED FIT,
    JUST TAKE YOUR TIME! KEEP "GOING"! DON'T "QUIT"!

    FOR IT'S NOT JUST A "PUZZLE", IT'S YOUR "LIFE" THAT YOU WROTE!
    THEY'LL BE "TIMES", WHEN YOU'LL MISS ON A "LINK" OR A "NOTE"

    NOW GO BACK AND "READ" AND SEE "WHAT" YOU'VE GOT,
    CAN YOU RELATE WITH YOUR "WORDS"? YOU CAN! AND GUESS WHAT,

    "MY FRIEND" YOU WERE TALKING TO "YOURSELF" CAN'T YOU SEE?
    "IT" WAS ALL "BOTTLED" UP! AND YOU'VE NOW SET IT "FREE"!!!!

    "POEMS "ARE A "BLESSING" WHEN "BAD TIMES" COME AROUND!
    AND "YOU'RE" YOUR OWN "BEST FRIEND"
    WHEN THE "URGE" COMES AROUND,JUST PICK UP THAT "PEN, "PAPER", AND A ROOM WITH NO "SOUND!!!!!


                                                                                      CAROLYN LOVE

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    ENDEAVER commented on "BELIEVE IT OR NOT"

    08-15-2009

    UPLIFTING, REASSURING HELPS MAKE POETRY WHAT IT IS. THANKS FOR THE INSPIRATION
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    ENDEAVER

    12/23/2009

    SEASONS GREETINGS

    Hampton commented on "BELIEVE IT OR NOT"

    07-26-2009

    A warm and friendly writing stle adds to this very nice poem about writing as a form of seeking serenity
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    carol1952

    07/26/2009

    thx hampton, yur always so nice, i'm glad someone actually gets beyond but at the same time can feel the words,carol

    dragonfly1023 commented on "BELIEVE IT OR NOT"

    07-19-2009

    there are several great points made in this poem. poetry's a journal in rhyme that's for sure. I'll bet few have ever thought of it this way. very original :D
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    carol1952

    07/20/2009

    thx my friend, i know it works for me lol,carol

    optimistic commented on "BELIEVE IT OR NOT"

    07-19-2009

    This is so true and well written you take a reader thru the journey of serenity and hope thru the words of love or despair, great write.
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    carol1952

    07/19/2009

    thx my friend, yur comment means alot to me,carol

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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