"Dream Girl"

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    "Dream Girl"
    She makes me laugh,she makes me smile. She's always there when I need her by my side. Picks me up when I'm down,criticizes me when I need it,she's my dream girl. She loves me unconditionally,never salvishes my name or slanders my character. Taught me to love deeply & cherish evry moment of life. Live free with no regrets,go for it all. She's my dream girl. Makes me warm inside evrytime I hear her voice,makes me think of her evry second passionately. She's my dream girl. I'd do anything for her,run to the end of the earth for her love if I had to. Climb the highest mountain of lust to get to her heart & fill it with my love. She's my dream girl.

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    JamilahAyanna commented on "Dream Girl"

    12-18-2009

    I dont know if you've actually found dis "Dream Girl" of which you speak of, but if by any chance you have then she must be very lucky. Love is da most beautiful gift we are given 2 share wit one anotha and it seems as if u have found it and beautifully shared your emotions wit us thru ur words....very nyce :)
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    Mrpoetry87

    12/29/2009

    Thank you so much.... I appreciate the love.... :=)

    lostsoul17 commented on "Dream Girl"

    11-25-2009

    love is beautiful once you hav e found it never ever let it go or you will never be the same
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    Dreamer123 commented on "Dream Girl"

    07-30-2009

    this is amazing i love it. shows how much you love your dream girl. this is an excellent job you did. very passionate. Love it. God bless you. :D
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    Mrpoetry87

    07/30/2009

    Thank you for the love on my poem I appreciate it.... I am very passionate about finding that one....

    SmileyAngel138 commented on "Dream Girl"

    07-29-2009

    beautiful and sweet..this shows a nice sensitve side to a man....great one :-)
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    Mrpoetry87

    07/30/2009

    Thank you ;=)... Every man has a sensitive side I'm just one of the few men who isn't scared to show it you know? I'm glad you like it....

    missedlover commented on "Dream Girl"

    07-23-2009

    thats amazing loving is living and living is dying...
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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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