"I am RAIN"

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    • I Reflect from light......SO think of me as a----> S-T-A-R!

    "I am RAIN"

    --"I taste the rain as an afterlife:"

    I'd condensate, precipitate, and drop upon a surface,
    And find what urge of "fume", would fuel from off "my purpose."

    I'd grow a mega-galaxy of membranes- of all sorts,
    And know what is non-polar, and what misions I would abort.

    I'd even crop an organisms's remains and apply it to terrain,
    And fall upon "beings"...release myself unto them as, RAIN.

    Have attitudes roam the day, and solemn quietly nights,
    And later have "flashbacks" of each event, and bring on thunderous frights.

    Yeah...,I'm such a pain, I see how one could complain
    I'm introducing myself..; I am the one... I am RAIN.

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    redbloodink commented on "I am RAIN"

    01-26-2010

    I like the rain myself........ nice write great flow....... red

    PoeticMind

    01/27/2010

    thank you... yes it wuz definitely one of those day too...lol so i let the imagery take me away!

    DeepEclipse commented on "I am RAIN"

    03-16-2009

    Smooth flow with lines that make the mind wander.

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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