"I Never Wrote A Love Poem..."

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    The closest thing to a love poem ever written by me lol

    "I Never Wrote A Love Poem..."

     I Never Wrote A Love Poem…



    Like the pristine blue of sixteen pools…
    Your crystalline hue is glistening through
    The reflection in my eyes paints a shimmering you
    You make my blood boil, then turn it to a simmering brew



    I’m so enraptured now…I’m hemorrhaging you
    My heart clears way for the missile he shoots…
    straight at my head…dismissing he’s proof…
    of this projectile called love, kissing deep roots



    Like the crisp clean hue of pristine blue
    You’re shimmering through and glistening too
    The reflection in my eyes paints a blistering you
    You set my soul on fire, then extinguish with dew



    I’m hopeless captured now…wrapped in kudzu
    My art gives way to a painting unto…
    she who’s spell I could never undo…
    because this x-file called love is finally getting just due.



    She carries no name because for this it’s uncouth…

    I never wrote a love poem…

    but this could be you.


    © 2008-2009 Malik Peterson. All Rights Reserved.

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    786mona commented on "I Never Wrote A Love Poem..."

    05-16-2010

    wonderful. i love this piece! good job and thanks for sharing it:)
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    MalikPeterson

    06/17/2010

    Thank you kindly...I am glad you liked :)

    BringMeBullets commented on "I Never Wrote A Love Poem..."

    03-24-2010

    Wow. This is amazing. You see all these people writing lovely poems about lost love and the love that they now bask in... But I have never read something like this before. How amazing! Thank you for sharing! I loved it!
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    MalikPeterson

    05/16/2010

    Ah this was another comment I missed as a result of moving...please forgive me for overlooking this one miss deacon. I appreciate you coming through and lending me your ear so to speak...and your wonderful comments :)

    mdpoetgirl commented on "I Never Wrote A Love Poem..."

    03-12-2010

    Absolutely beautiful... I'm really loving the 5-part series you asked me to read, Malik. This is great!
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    MalikPeterson

    03/13/2010

    Thank you Mels...(Mel) I am really glad you like them...and really glad to have you here as my guest :)

    Mandi commented on "I Never Wrote A Love Poem..."

    02-26-2010

    This is true romance. I wish I knew who this was written to. She's a lucky girl. Your style is unusual and flows like a song. Did you intend it to be that way?
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    ginga commented on "I Never Wrote A Love Poem..."

    02-23-2010

    malik, The tile of this poem sent its aura out letting me know it would be something that was unexpected. Your piercing lines explain why a love poem can be risky. I commend you on this antithesis. ginga
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    MalikPeterson

    02/25/2010

    thank you ginga...I am glad you liked it...and I appreciate you stopping by as always :)

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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