"INSANE?"

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    "INSANE?"

    HOW DOES ONE REALIZE THEY'RE GOING "INSANE"?

    THAT'S A TOUGH QUESTION, IT'S HARD TO EXPLAIN.

    YOU MUST HIT "ROCKBOTTOM",,,,REACHED "THE END" OF YOUR ROPE,

    IT'LL MESS WITH YOUR HEAD, AND YOU'LL JUST GIVE UP "HOPE"!

    YOU'LL "REBELLE", AGAINST OTHERS, DON'T WANT THEM AROUND,

    IF THEY CALL OUT YOUR NAME?, YOU WON'T HEAR A "SOUND".

    "BOTTLED" UP WITH YOUR TROUBLES, THEY'LL SWALLOW YOU WHOLE,

    YOU DON'T TALK TO "NO ONE", YOU'VE "LOST" ALL CONTROL!

    FROM "FEAR", YOU WILL TRIMBLE, YOUR "MIND" WILL PLAY GAMES,

    "NO ONE" IS THERE FOR YOU,,,,POINTS TO "YOU" ALL THE BLAMES!

    "SELF PITY" WILL SMOTHER YOU,,NO EATING,NO SLEEP,

    WHEN TEARS START TO FLOW,,,,,,,YOU'LL SIT AND JUST WEEP!

    YOU'LL SUDDENLY REALIZE,,,,,,IN THE "CORNER" YOUR EYES,

    YOU SAW "SOMETHING" CRAWLING,,IT GETS "BIGGER" IN SIZE!

    YOU'LL "TWITCH" AND YOU'LL "SCRAMBLE", TO FIND WHAT IT IS,

    BUT "NOTHING" IS FOUND!,,,,YOUR "MIND" STARTS TO FIZ!

    TO "BLOCK" OUT THE WORLD, IS A TERRIBLE THING,
    YOU'LL "HEAR TINY VOICES",YOUR EARS START TO RING!

    YOU'LL "COVER" THEM TIGHTLY,,,,"THEY'LL" JUST GO AWAY!

    "JUST LEAVE ME ALONE"! "DON'T WANT YOU TO STAY!"

    "YOU'LL" BEGIN TO START "MUMBLING", AS YOU WATCH ALL AROUND,

    "YOU" WILL "ANSWER" YOURSELF, AS YOU "FOLD" ON THE GROUND.

    "YOU'LL GET "PARNOID" OF SOUNDS! ARE "THEY" COMING FOR YOU??!

    ARE "THEY" COMING TO "CAPTURE" YOU? AND THEN "WHAT" "THEY'LL" DO!!!!

    THEN, THEN THE NEXT THING YOU KNOW,,,,,,YOU'LL OPEN YOUR EYES,

    A "SECURED" ROOM WITH NURSES, CALMING DOWN ALL YOURS "CRYS"!!!!


                                                                                 CAROLYN LOVE

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    tommy54 commented on "INSANE?"

    09-09-2009

    been there done that, sounds like we have a lot in common. i have been in recovery for years and years but reading your poem took me right back to that dark lonely place. very good

    Tempestlady commented on "INSANE?"

    07-08-2009

    Really enjoying your work, this is good. Thought provoking, but excellent work. I like the perspective you take and the way you connect with the reader. Write on.....

    carol1952

    07/09/2009

    thx again! yur much too kind! yu know all these years i just wrote poems on request, never thought to make anything of them lol have a great night my friend,carol

    ATCS commented on "INSANE?"

    07-06-2009

    i see THEY have been following u, too. lol. thx for the invite. i'm enjoying meandering through ur stuff. this made me laugh (only because it's true).

    carol1952

    07/06/2009

    LOL THX MY FRIEND, GLAD YOU LIKED IT,CAROL

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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