"IT"

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    "IT"

    I possess a constant yearning
    for my love who's just returning,
    To "IT" a dark den of hate and despise,
    too much for her virgin eyes.
    "IT" looks lovely but the pain is hiding
    deep down monsters are residing.
    With covetous, jealous eyes "IT" sees,
    the beauty that does belong to me.
    "IT" tries and tries,yet all in vain,
    to steal the heart that beats my name.
    With flowers and songs and these such things
    "IT"tries to steal the joy she brings.
    But, you see, I weep not a tear of sorrow,
    For I know there will surely come tomorrow,
    A day to shield my beautiful girl,
    From this horrible "IT" known as THE WORLD!

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    BreeLove commented on "IT"

    01-05-2011

    yes yes.... truth and reality all rolled up in one ! nice write! -Bree

    phatdaddee

    01/06/2011

    Thank you for visiting Phatville Bree! Glad you came!

    MarionYost commented on "IT"

    05-22-2010

    This is awesome. I like your style & look forward to reading more ;) All the best -Marion-

    phatdaddee

    05/28/2010

    Thanks for the compliment! I try to put forth the effort to get a reader hooked.

    Crush commented on "IT"

    08-02-2009

    okay, now this is wonderful too. "too much for her virgin eyes" seems to speak to how vulnerable she is. although the sentiment is old your words are fresh and new. thank you.

    phatdaddee

    08/03/2009

    Thanks for the read and the comment Bro! I wrote this as a teen!

    JadedJezzabel commented on "IT"

    05-16-2009

    very smart basis of subject. few really know IT as ugly as IT can be. Sometimes it seems only those who have been to prison or have lived life on the fringe of society really know IT as IT is. cool poem

    phatdaddee

    05/29/2009

    I wote this when I was about 17. Alost soul shouting at the darkness.

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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