"Metaphor Me"

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    "Metaphor Me"

    "Metaphor Me"

    I am that force that pulls away from attraction
    But subtle to connect with Earth, its features, and all interactions.

    At times I can be that great ball of fire(the sun), full of fury and raged
    But soothed by "Life's Aloe" I am moisturized and saved.

    --I cry for the rain, and yell to the sea....
    Embrace my intuition, and the "Metaphor Me"

    I am the white clouds stuffed, by condensation
    And released onto all..MY mind-filled precipitation

    I am that noise in the dark that paranoia brings around
    Hear thee clearly...the tremble...the fear..Excitement is outloud.

    SOME HOW I,..

    --I cry for the rain, and yell to the sea....
    Embrace my intuition, and the "Metaphor Me"

    I would love to be GOD, the ruler of existence
    And show life's purpose from "our" reality's difference

    I can be the "soul of life" and as real as it can be

    YET STILL I......
    --I cry for the rain, and yell to the sea....
    Embrace my intuition, and the "METAPHOR ME!!!!"

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    CasimirJash commented on "Metaphor Me"

    09-16-2009

    great poem, I think I found competition, but yeah you are very talented, I try to come up with my own metaphor sometimes lol

    DeepEclipse commented on "Metaphor Me"

    03-13-2009

    Your style of rhyme is impressive. The deep perception just adds to that talent. Lookin forward to more of your work. Peace

    drewking commented on "Metaphor Me"

    12-09-2008

    awesome poem dude!! i wish mine were this good...

    causeofbalance commented on "Metaphor Me"

    12-08-2008

    I like your poem, I was specifically looking for philosophical ones, as that is what I try to write, but not many try this kind. I like the duality it sets up, and a constant change through life's instances. Anything I left out that was pertinent t

    PoeticMind commented on "Metaphor Me"

    12-04-2008

    this is just me and my thoughts... suppose this was TRUTH

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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