"Our baby no more"

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    For my two lovely younger sisters. I love you always...

    "Our baby no more"

    In my ears, you’re cute laugh lingers,

    You’re tiny delicate fingers slipped to mine,

    In my eyes, mirrors your innocent smile,

    Our adorable little angel, you’re baby no more.

     

    Now, that you’re a full grown lady,

    You’re sweetness I no longer see.

    You’re hands I no longer hold,

    Our sweet baby, you’re baby no more.

     

    Now, that you’re with me,

    You’re safety I often assure.

    I will be here to guide your way,

    So you won’t go astray.

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    knight4696 commented on "Our baby no more"

    10-24-2009

    Jammaekas - your sisters are truly fortunate to have you as their big sister. Not all are so lucky. This is a very nice poem and a great representaion of the loving person you are. Great Job. Ken

    jammaekas

    10/24/2009

    They're truly are :)...

    icu2 commented on "Our baby no more"

    10-20-2009

    What a wonderful big sister. That is how my big sisters are with me. Always calling and making sure I am happy....wanting to know if I need anything...lol . So sweet to read.................Thanks!...................TEN!

    scrye commented on "Our baby no more"

    09-09-2009

    wonderful poem and contribute to your sister. The poem is well written and properly placed phrase, warm imagery. A pleasure to read. Keep posting and let me know when you publish.

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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