"Out of the Mist"

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    "Out of the Mist"

    Out of the Mist

    Out from the shadows, out of the mist
    Slithering, stalking from behind the ancient tomb
    He's waiting watching, clenching his fist
    She's as provocative and sensual like a fresh bloom

    He must catch his breath from the very first sight
    Unbearably enticing, her aroma so undeniable
    He tries to hang on, to hold back, with all his might
    The power she possesses, so extremely viable

    Hearing the roar and rush through her veins
    The sight, the smell, the sound, he bites his lip
    The power of bloodlust he can not restrain
    Out of his mind, thinking, "Just one sip!"

    Skin so white like a porcelain doll
    Senses heightened to such a degree
    There is no resisting, no, none at all
    It's now too late, he knows it must be

    Oblivious to her surrounding
    She has no idea, inkling or clue
    Her bossom heaving, her heart is pounding
    She knows not what will soon be true

    Stunning, handsome, so very charming
    Thinking to herself, "Oh goodness, oh my!"
    Such a beautiful wonder, not at all alarming
    Not aware for a second she's about to die

    Out of the shadows, out from the mist
    She thinks nothing of it
    As he takes her hand, and turns her wrist
    Gentle kisses and then she is bit

    The crimson nectar flows from her vein
    Flashes of her life go by her eyes
    The suffering is over, there'll be no more pain
    She smiles softly, body limp, all in an instant, she dies...



    Dori Wheeler
    18may09






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    gogant commented on "Out of the Mist"

    07-01-2009

    This is one terrific piece...except for the dying. Gogant

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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