"Promiscuous"

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    I just couldn't resist...here is another "love" poem lol.

    "Promiscuous"

    Promiscuous 

    You’re so promiscuous but I’ll never let you go…
    Even though you give your kiss too quick to any man who would propose…
    I’ll be damned if you don’t know just how I feel before I close.
    You’re so promiscuous…but I couldn’t do without you I suppose.



    How many men did you love before me?
    A great many them flung off your top for free…
    Gripped your bottom half and made your wet pores leak.
    Then I’d play your next victim…you’d sing for me…
    but your song would only serve to make more see…
    that I’m powerless against you because I was born weak.

    Our meeting was a fated cliché…slated for des…ti…ny 
    Yet, I couldn’t foresee that you would adore me.
    I feel a certain way about it and it could be sorely
    Though the jury’s still out on…if I follow your lead…
    or do I control you and…you support me?

    I don’t know…but sometimes…

    I feel like I’m possessed by you.
    Like I’m obsessed to profess and confess my truths
    and your smile relieves stress…caresses my roots…
    flowing from top to bottom…left to right too.

    Still…there is no amount of metaphor I could use to describe you.

    You enable me to pour my heart out…
    sometimes my soul.
    With no you I’m leaving parts out…
    now I am whole.

    So…yes…

    You’ve been touched by many men…
    but…when I embrace you…I’m giving in again.
    I don’t know how they treat you but I hope to contend…
    and let you bleed beauty till your eloquent end.

    So I dedicate this to you…my love…

    my pen.
    © 2008-2009 Malik Peterson. All Rights Reserved.

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    simoneaugustus commented on "Promiscuous"

    05-16-2010

    Wow!!! I love that whole poem and then the last 2 words blew me away! If this isn't in the weekly contest, it should be. Fantastic!

    danmartyjake1 commented on "Promiscuous"

    03-04-2010

    Eloquently written prose on a unique affair. Good job of describing the case to the reader.

    MalikPeterson

    03/05/2010

    thanks so much dmj. I am glad you liked it :)

    oneloveALZ commented on "Promiscuous"

    12-15-2009

    this poem is so beautiful....deep in many ways n very well written ;]

    MalikPeterson

    12/15/2009

    Thanks one. I am truly glad you like it. :)

    Madelynn commented on "Promiscuous"

    12-05-2009

    You left a comment on one of mine-and mentioned a dedication poem to your pen, this must be the one!!You got me with that last line..why I outta!! Really though, another major showcase of your talent!!-I can say, this one goes in my favorites.-peace,Maddi

    MalikPeterson

    12/06/2009

    Ah shucks lol...thanks again Maddi...yeah most if not all people did not see that one coming lol. So you are in good company. Thank you so much again for reading and commenting. I am ever appreciative. :)

    blanket commented on "Promiscuous"

    11-30-2009

    HAHHHAHAHH~~~~~~~~ Freaking love it. Was going to go off on Rick James slutorama rip off but you twisted me, you devil, you. fantastic.

    MalikPeterson

    12/01/2009

    A crafty one I am...shifty...deceptive...lol thanks blanket...glad you liked it. :)

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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