"QUIET PLACE"

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"QUIET PLACE"

      HAVE YOU EVER HAD DAYS, WHEN THERE'S NO ONE AROUND?
YOU'RE LIVING ON "QICKSAND", THERE'S NO SOLID GROUND.
THE BILLS KEEP ON PILEING,,,,,NO MONEY TO PAY,
YOU AVOID ALL THE PHONE CALLS, THAT "DUNN" YOU EACH DAY.

YOU HOLD YOUR EARS TIGHTLY, AND JUST SIT THERE AND CRY,
YOU'RE ON A "FIXED INCOME",ALL YOU CAN DO IS JUST TRY!
YOU TRY HARD TO FIGHT IT,BUT YOUR BECOMING "DEPRESSED",
THERE'S TOO MUCH TO BARGIN! AND IT'S KEEPING YOU STRESSED!


HAVE YOU TRIED CREATING A PLACE OF YOUR OWN?
A "PLACE" TO UNWIND, FORGETTING ALL THAT'S BEEN "THROWN"!
IT'LL BE CALLED YOUR "QUIET PLACE", AND IT'S THERE JUST FOR YOU,

TAKE A BOOK, PEN, AND PAPER, YOU'LL KNOW WHAT TO DO.

NOW, FIND A NICE SPOT, AND SIT IN THE SHADE,
"BLOCK OUT" ALL THE "STRESS", FROM THE BILLS THAT AREN'T PAID!

THIS IS YOUR SPOT, FOR "PEACE",,,,,,,,,,AND IT DON'T COST A DIME!!
"YOU SET THE PLACE",,,,,,,,AND "YOU SET THE TIME"!
JUST "CLOSE" YOUR EYES, IT'S AMAZING YOU'LL SEE!
JUST TO "RELAX", THINK OF "SOMEWHERE" ELSE YOU'D BE.

"LISTEN" TO "SOUNDS" OF "NATURE" AROUND,
AND THE "FLOW" OF THE CREEK, LIKE A "WATERFALL" FOUND!

THINK "PLEASANT" THOUGHTS TO CALM DOWN YOUR "STRESS"

YOU CAN TALK TO "GOD"! HE'LL CLEAN UP YOUR MESS!

"CLOSE" YOUR EYES,"SPREAD" YOUR ARMS,
LET "THE BREEZE" BLOW ON YOU,
"THINK"WHAT YOU "ACCOMPLISHED", NOT THE "THINGS" YOU CAN'T DO!

THIS IS YOUR "SPECIAL PLACE",,,PUT A "SMILE" ON THAT FACE!
"FEEL" THE "COOL BREEZE" BLOW!
"HEAR" THE "WATERFALL" FLOW!

"LISTEN" TO THE BIRDS SING, "WATCH" THE SQUIRRELS PLAY IN TREES!
AS THE "FROGS" JUMP ON WATER, GET DOWN ON YOUR KNEES!


NOW, YOU SEE HOW "MOTHER NATURE", CAN PUT YOU AT "PEACE"?
"THIS" IS "YOUR" "QUIET PLACE" AND ALL "PROBLEMS" WILL CEASE!


WATCH THE "BUTTERFLIES" "FLUTTER", SO PEACEFUL AND FREE?
"THESE" ARE THINGS TOOK FOR GRANTED,,,,,,,,YOU "FEEL" WHAT YOU SEE!

NOW, WRITE YOUR "FRUSTRATIONS" ALL DOWN ON A PAGE,
LET "IT" FLOW DOWN THE CREEK, RELEASING "TENTION" AND "RAGE".

YOU'LL FEEL YOURSELF "CALMER", NO NEED FOR A "TEAR",

FOR YOU FOUND YOUR "QUIET PLACE", AND "GOD'S" ALWAYS "NEAR"!!!!!!!                                                             


                                                                         CAROLYN LOVE

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soulwriter commented on "QUIET PLACE"

07-12-2009

I do have a quiet place of my own and I can see by this peace that you found your inner peace in your own Quiet Place. Well written and calm felt through your calmly placed words.

carol1952

07/12/2009

thank you my friend, we should all have one, it's like a short escape, and a time out from drama. carol

laydbak1 commented on "QUIET PLACE"

07-10-2009

Awe, such a nice feel good little piece... yea, it may all still be waitin for us when we get back, but just for that little while, it's like all that headache is in some other universe... good write..

carol1952

07/10/2009

lol ok, can yu tell me why they deleted my photos next to my poems my friend?

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

carol1952’s Poems (56)

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"MY VISIT TO HEAVEN" 1
"havent a clue" 0
THIS BROKEN DOWN ANGEL 1
"TO BE OR NOT TO BE" 2
"COMPANION" 2
"MY LIFE IN A "NUT" CELL" 2
"FARM LIFE" 2
"COMPUTERS" 3
"WALLS" 2
"RAINBOWS" 3
"CHANGES" 2
"WILL YOU BE READY?" 1
"THE CONNECTION" 2
"THE INTRODUCTION" 1
"THE BASICS OF LIFE" 1
"JUST A LITTLE TALK WITH JESUS" 1
"MISSING YOU" 1
"CINNAMON" 2
"JUST A MATTER OF TIME" 5
"A GIFT FROM GOD" 8
"I BELIEVE"!!! 6
"CAN'T MISS A FRIEND, YOU NEVER HAD!" 5
"USA" 3
"BELIEVE IT OR NOT" 4
"AS THE WORLD TURNS" 4
"FANTASY FROM THE "PASSED" 1
"QUIET PLACE" 2
"SOMETHING FISHY" 4
"LESSONS LEARNED, TABLES TURNED!" 6
"THE JOURNAL" 4
"BORROWED TIME" 5
"YOUR'RE NOT ALONE" 4
"JUST IN TIME" 1
"LIFE" 1
"TIM" 4
"INSANE?" 4
"A WORKING SOUL'S BOOST" 4
"A TRUE BLESSING" 1
"WITHDRAWN, WITH NO HOPE" 1
"GOING HOME" 0
"GONNA PLAY,,,,GOTTA PAY!" 3
"THE TREE" 4
"WEATHER OR NOT"! 1
"MY JOURNEY WITH GOD" 1
"MARRIAGE GONE WILD!" 2
"CHRONIC PLEA" 0
"NOT ALWAYS A "BOX OF "CHOCOLATES!" 1
"THE POWER OF PRAYER" 4
"ADDICTION" 2
"CONFUSED, AND DOWNHEARTED" 2
"ACCEPTANCE" 4
"TWO DOGS DISCUSSING POLITICS" 4
"DOG NAMED BLUE" 1
"POET AND DIDN'T KNOW IT" 2
"9-11-01" 3
"A CRY FOR HELP" 3