"Raging Sanity Part 1 and 2"


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These are two of my newest works So tell me what you think it is a new twist on things i hope you will all enjoy.

You Freind and fellow poet

"Raging Sanity Part 1 and 2"

"Raging Sanity Part 1"

"Landscapes of a Broken Dream"

Landscapes of a broken dream pave the was to insanity
As you follow this path that leads nowhere

Your eyes flicker to the images of your shattered past
The pain of watching your mistakes again
Burns your retinas till they fuse with your cold dark iris
Only creating another void to what is your soul

....The emptiness....
Feels as if someone cut out your center with a butter knife
....But your still alive....
....Walking alone....
....And no one cares....

"Raging Sanity Part 2"

"Broken Sanity"

....Pain feeds your hunger....
....The more It hurts....
....The more you feel the need....
....As the clock ticks and tocks....
....I watch your life slip away....
....And it makes me happy....
....If only for the moment....
....Death impowers me....

Your hatred has sawed through the chain of faith
Which holds your body and soul together
In turn you now have two personalitys
They will fight amongst them selves
And neither will be victoriuos

In the end the only thing left
....Is me...
....Your Broken Sanity....

Poems by: TheAngelOfDeath

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papapaczki commented on "Raging Sanity Part 1 and 2"


Interesting piece. Captures the hurt and emptiness endured after the loss of someone. Well written.

Desmotti commented on "Raging Sanity Part 1 and 2"


The burning pools in which you bathe drownd you....a constant...though you shrink in the shadow of drifting thought only a hope to find yourself as moi de (Dark Child)...Death empowers no one for it is an illusion. The misunderstanding of mortality is just that...to understand....anything....one must achieve that knowledge through the passing....or experience. The Angel of Death is just a keeper of the keys to mortality for death not ends the intelligence....intelligence always has been. Progression is only denied by they who choose not to...progress. Rush not into your personal void...for there are many things that reside in pitch....-Desmotti-

klassik commented on "Raging Sanity Part 1 and 2"


this is another great story! i am still waiting for more the "maniac" great write stay dark




optimistic commented on "Raging Sanity Part 1 and 2"


This is a great write to the sequil of poems that are to come, I will read great write.

beautifuldeath commented on "Raging Sanity Part 1 and 2"


your words are like a drug to me, and yes i am addicted. I cannot wait for more. Loved it. 10 from me

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Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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Raging Sanity Prt 4 2
"Raging Sanity Part 3" 3
"Raging Sanity Part 1 and 2" 9
"The Maniac Part 8" 6
"The Maniac Part 7" 4
"The Maniac Part 6" 5
"The Maniac Part 5" 5
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"The Maniac Part 3" 8
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"The Maniac Part 1" 14
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"The Beams of the Sun" 7
"Beautiful Death" 5
"Faith for the Faithless" 1
"The Black Flowers Of Death" 3
"The Thief" 6
"The Weary Traveler" 6
"Scarlet Moon" 17
"The Replacement" Revised 6
My Hell 1
Soiled 6
The Teacher 5
The Earth's Rebirth Part 2 4
Dance of Death 1
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..The Face Of Death.. -7
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Feet First 10
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Mocking Words 2
Death's Decay 3
The Economy 2
The Road Of Time 3
La Santa Muerte 10
The Calling 1
Waiting to Die 1
The Perfect Death 4
Poetry Speaks 3
Death's Embrace 9
My Life 9
Ghostless Shell 11
List Of The Unholy 14
Despair.. 12
Betrayed 11
The Unborn 5
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Dead Seeds 4
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Black Label 16
Storm Of The Calm 4
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Judgement 6
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Forever 5
Fate 4
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Dark,Light 1
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