"Someone Help Her"

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    • FLAWLES
    • I am the birth of a legend and the mold of an icon; and I've installed myself on the desktop of the world for its inhabitants to keep their eye on.

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    ONE OF OUR FELLOW POETS IS GOING THROUGH THIS.  PLEASE PRAY FOR HER THAT SHE ESCAPES THIS SITUATION SOME HOW. 
    WHAT IS A MAN THAT HITS A WOMAN?
    A MALE BITCH!

    Response to "Message in a Bottle" by Mskrystle

    "Someone Help Her"

    She thinks she's a slave in her own body.  She calls her oppressor Massa.
    But she's an ebony queen that needs to shed her shackles of this  domestic disasta.
    It's not her race, that keeps her down, it is the stronger hand of the opposite gender.
    She's crying out for someone to help; and this is how I'm reaching out a hand to lend her.


    She's a woman, and that gives him reason, to feel he has the upper hand.
    But when a male puts an aggressive hand on a female, he relinquishes, the status of man.
    She doesn't speak, for fear his hand, will raise, and she will get beat.
    This scrotumless weasel, needs to recognize, she is not just  a piece of meat.


    Her mirror reveals, black and blue skin that will not yield to any cosmetic.
    He needs to stop, these barbaric actions, before she needs some form of prosthetic.
    Afraid to leave, so she stays, and too ashamed to go and tell.
    So she lives, under his rule, in a situation that replicates Hell 


    She's seeking help, by a letter to myself; but I, am too far away.
    This is how I respond, and tonight to my creator, all I can do is hope and pray.
    She has come to the conclusion, she can not leave nor, can she stay.
    So she lays herself, down to sleep, and prays to her God, to take her away



    Le$
    10/11/09

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    MsKrystle commented on "Someone Help Her"

    09-02-2010

    Wow I didnt know you wrote a response to my poem. I really like this response, although I have to make a confession: There is no truth to that poem, atleast not for me. I put myself in so many other women's shoes who actually live like this. A prisoner in their own home, broken down by fear and living in hell on earth. I expressed their feelings through poetic form and pray that one day they will find a way out. Thank you for your response

    FLAWLES

    09/03/2010

    You sent me that poem by personal message to me at 12:30am on 9-28-09, and I assumed it was your way of reaching out for someone to help. I wrote it 10-11-09. I felt really bad for you; but I'm glad to know you weren't speaking of yourself.

    BlackButterfly1 commented on "Someone Help Her"

    09-02-2010

    "But when a male puts an aggressive hand on a female, he relinquishes, the status of man." Well said.

    FLAWLES

    09/03/2010

    Speaking from a man that has NEVER struck a female before, I despise any form of abuse. Thanx BB1 for your words.

    GucciGurl commented on "Someone Help Her"

    02-14-2010

    Again you make my heart cry. I will pray for anyone that has to go threw this. She must find some strenght to get out of this Hell. She must get some hep before it is to late. You r so good to write this for her. God Bless you

    FLAWLES

    09/03/2010

    I just got word that the person that wrote the poem that made me write this one, wasn't a victim. Thanx for you comment GG

    jlovett05 commented on "Someone Help Her"

    11-09-2009

    omg.. how touching this poem is and so many ppl can relate to what she is going through. i hope that she has the strength to get up and leave because she deserves so much better than that.. my prayers are with her.. very touching poem

    1990lh commented on "Someone Help Her"

    11-08-2009

    wow like wow is really ihave to say, and SOB!!!!!!

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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