"Spring,Summer,Fall,Win
ter" (Repost)

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    This poem is one of my favorite poems that i have writin i have reposted it so it might have a chance to win the contest. Thnx to all
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    "Spring,Summer,Fall,Winter" (Repost)

    "Spring,Summer,Fall,Winter"

    Life is standing still like sand wedged between a rock in a hourglass
    ....The time has come again for the seasons to change....
     
    While the majestic god runs down the lakeside
    His white fur glistens with the sparkle of the moon light on the water.

    As his speed merges with that of the wind
    He floats along his empire like a gentle breeze.

    The black night sky only complementing his beauty
    With kisses of starlight to his eyes and face.

    When his paws touch the earth's soil flowers jump forth and bloom
    In the hopes of being near the feet of thier master.

    While weaving in and out through the old saplings of spring
    The leaves leap from the trees for a chance to fly with their god
    If only for a few seconds.
    Only to be left desolate on the ground as a colorful trail of respect.

    Finally as the god's run comes to an end
    The cries of a forest cold from despair call to him
    ....and the cycle starts again.... 


    a poem by: TheAngelOfDeath

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    robynize commented on "Spring,Summer,Fall,Winter" (Repost)

    10-21-2010

    This has gorgeous imagery, great work friend, as always!

    TimG commented on "Spring,Summer,Fall,Winter" (Repost)

    10-15-2009

    well done ! each word had meaning and put together, they told a nice tale !

    papapaczki commented on "Spring,Summer,Fall,Winter" (Repost)

    10-14-2009

    You crafted a really nice image with your words. I can vividly see the scene in my head. Great poem! 10

    Rygar commented on "Spring,Summer,Fall,Winter" (Repost)

    10-14-2009

    very moving, great imagery and a pleasure to read, now... stop stabbing me!! :)

    SuperChick76 commented on "Spring,Summer,Fall,Winter" (Repost)

    10-14-2009

    Nicely written, it flowed very well and I loved the imagery you painted. Beautiful job.

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

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