"THE MAN OF MY DREAMS"

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    "THE MAN OF MY DREAMS"

     WHEN I LOOK AT YOUR FACE

    I SEE THE MAN OF MY DREAMS

    TALL, DARK, & BROWN EYED



    WHEN I LISTENED 2 U SPEAK

    YOUR VOICE CAPTIVATES ME

    DEEP & SOOTHING

    JUST LIKE I IMAGINED IT 2 BE



    WHEN I REFLECT ON YOUR WORDS

    YOUR INNER THOUGHTS

    I CAN ONLY SIT BACK

    AND RECOGNIZE WHAT THE LORD HAS WROUGHT



    U ARE BEAUTIFUL

    PHYSICALLY & SPIRITUALLY

    YOU'RE EVERYTHING I WISHED 4 U 2 BE

    2 PUT IT SIMPLY

    THE MAN OF MY DREAMS



    TJS

    7/02/09

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    fred1932 commented on "THE MAN OF MY DREAMS"

    12-29-2009

    Hey baby, I'm just flowing my way through giving responses since God has blessed me with your thoughts. This is very beautiful, I don't see where you skipped a line. Can't tell, once again, sweetie this is beautiful
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    optimistic commented on "THE MAN OF MY DREAMS"

    07-29-2009

    Simple delicate poem at work for a cause and mission to make a valid point on one that you care so dearly aboutl, another Great write.
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    JamilahAyanna commented on "THE MAN OF MY DREAMS"

    07-21-2009

    Very cute I loved dis it wuz simple yet very endeering.....
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    SILKYTWEED commented on "THE MAN OF MY DREAMS"

    07-20-2009

    Beautiful Write...very strong and soothing devotional piece, to the man of your dreams, I really enjoyed this piece...Thanks for Sharing....ONE!
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    poetress77

    07/20/2009

    i thank u 4 reading both poems, u are a sweetheart. I kinda messed this one up, I left one line completely out & misprinted another word, but your rating is appreciated lol. I wish they would let u edit it still, oh well

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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