"THE TREE"

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    "THE TREE"


    OUT OF ALL NATURE"S WONDERS, JUST LEAVE IT TO ME,
    TO "REQUEST" THAT MY POEM'S TO BE WROTE OF A "TREE"!

    ON A HOT SUMMERS DAY, WHEN THERE'S HARDLY A BREEZE,
    THERE'S NOTHING REFRESHING, LIKE THE "SHADE" FROM THE "TREE".

    THEY'RE TAKEN FOR GRANTED,ALL THE BEAUTY THEY SHARE,
    NOT MANY WILL NOTICE, THEIR "WARMTH" AND THEIR "FLARE".

    THERE'S ALL SHAPES AND SIZES, SOME"FULL" AND SOME "THIN",
    SOME WILL GROW LARGE LEAVES, SOME SMALL AS A PIN!

    MOST ARE ABUSED, BY THE BLADE OF A KNIFE,"CARVING" OF NAMES, COULD CAUSE "TREES", SHORTER LIFE.

    THE "DRAINAGE" OF SAP, TURNS WHITE LIKE A PASTE,
    "EVENTUALLY", NATURE WILL THEN BECOME WASTE!

    AS "CHIDREN",WE CLIMBED THEM,, AS "TEENS", WE CARVED WORDS,
    AS "ADULTS", WE ENJOY THEM,........THEY'RE HOMES FOR THE BIRDS!

    IN THE SUMMER THEY "SHADE", IN THE FALL THEY WILL "SHED",
    IN THE WINTER, THEY'LL "SLEEP", BUT MIGHT APPEAR "DEAD".

    IN THE SPRING,THEY'LL "AWAKEN", AND "BUDS", WILL THEN "BLOOM",
    LIKE THE "MIRACLE" OF LIFE,ONLY NOT FROM "THE WOMB"!

    JUST MAYBE MY POEM, WILL HELP OTHERS TO SEE,
    "THE SIMPLE" ENJOYMENT, THAT I GET FROM "THE TREE"!!!!!


                                                                               CAROLYN LOVE

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    ginga commented on "THE TREE"

    07-19-2009

    carol, You have a refreshing and conversational writing style which is enjoyable to read. I too wrote a poem about a tree. If you are interested you can check out "TREE" on my homepage. This poem of yours is in prose while mine is a bit more abbreviated and no feelings are attached. Ginga

    carol1952

    07/20/2009

    hi ginga, thx so much for the comment! that poem was written about 5 yrs ago lol someone told me it cant be done so i had to show them it could! lol i also enjoy your poems but i'll go back and find the tree and read it ok? thx again hun,carol

    Tempestlady commented on "THE TREE"

    07-08-2009

    I live in a woods surrounded by many grandmother trees bigger around than i can stretch 3 peoples arms. I love them also and they give me peace. I even had outside thanksgiving feast, bees and all. Love your work, know your spirit, glad yu saved your soul. Write on......

    carol1952

    07/09/2009

    yeah it's funny for i've not got one tree in my yard! i would love to have a big shade tree! thx for the wonderful words,carol

    tierra7 commented on "THE TREE"

    07-06-2009

    this is great! i love it..thanx for sharin', keep sharin'

    carol1952

    07/06/2009

    THX TIERRA7, I LIKE YURS AS WELL, CAROL

    speed11935 commented on "THE TREE"

    07-05-2009

    I loved it. The rhyme is great. You said it all. Thanks

    carol1952

    07/05/2009

    LOL THX MY FRIEND,CAROL

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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