"Untitled"

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  • Lost Love

    Poem Commentary

    This is simply to vent. To fall in love and to lose that love is a pain that will always be with you.

    "Untitled"

    Darkness surrounds me
    Forever I do not see

    Will I always feel pain
    Will I always be in the rain

    Will this storm ever end
    Will my heart ever mend

    Why is pain love
    Where is my white dove

    Always I am dead inside
    My soul will not survive

    In this fall I am taking
    Pain the only thing I am making

    My own fire I will burn 
    My own hell will return

    In love I will never be 
    The haunting past I will always see

    The love of past
    I could not make last 

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    VirtuousVal0812 commented on "Untitled"

    04-01-2013

    I feel the sadness in this piece. It gave me an urge of self motivation. Being in love can be painful but you have to push forward and know that you can give it after try. Nice poem!

    che234 commented on "Untitled"

    07-23-2009

    Wellcome to the club, unfortunately hell's fires on earth don't burn forever sorry, it would do you the more good to look beyond yourself, the world needs you so don't limit yourself just pick yourself up and march on with myriads of us with coronets of sorrow. Good piece dear

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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