"Where I Want To Be" by Herbert Hewliss Brown

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  • Herbthepoet
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"Where I Want To Be" by Herbert Hewliss Brown

Where dolphins swim and Eagles fly is where I want to be-to brave the deepest ocean waters let the wind the open sky set my soul free.

Where you hear no traffic sounds-no sirens no ambulance only peaceful sounds quite sounds like how butterflies dance.

Never any noise no interruptions no telephones to ring just a peaceful, lovely quiet place away from everything.

Where I want to be-is there really such a place? Where there is never-ending joy and love-no dishonor or disgrace.

Our world is full of tension, confusion, guilt and rage-we have all become actors we must all take the stage.

The part I want to play is a part where I am free- most of all right now that is where I want to be.

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hattyej commented on "Where I Want To Be" by Herbert Hewliss Brown

11-23-2009

I am fixated on format and my critique usually includes that point. The flow sometimes get lost in the formatting. That's the only thing I find "wrong" with this piece. You have expressed yourself well in this one and I could "see" your peaceful place. Well done

Herbthepoet

07/29/2011

Forgive me for taking nearly 2 years to respond. I have no real excuse- and they do not exist. However, I gladly accept your constructive comments. We all need each other to push us forward and into the light. Please, continue reading my submissions and I shall read yours. We must always enjoy the meeting of great minds and great thinkers!

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)