"WITHDRAWN, WITH NO HOPE"

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"WITHDRAWN, WITH NO HOPE"


AS I SIT HERE TODAY, AS MANY WILL DO,
FEELING "DOUBTFUL", NO "HOPE", THAT I'LL AGAIN MAKE IT THROUGH.
"LIFE'S" GETTING "HARDER",SO MUCH I CAN TAKE,
"SOME", MAY GET "LUCKY",,,,,,"SOME", SEE "NO BREAK"!

THING'S CAN BE BETTER!, IT'S ALL UP TO "YOU",
"SOME'S" TRIED EVERY "OPTION", WHAT ELSE CAN THEY DO!

THAT'S WHEN FEELING'S OF "EMPTINESS"......CREEPS INTO YOUR "SOUL",
THAT'S "HITTING ROCK BOTTOM",,,,,,,JUST COVER THIS "HOLE"!

"NIGHTS", CAN BE BEARING,,,,,,NOT ONE SOUL WILL COME "KNOCK"!
JUST "STARING" AT HOURS,,,,,AS THEY TICK ON THE "CLOCK"
THE "PHONE", NEVER RINGS,,WHEN "DOWN" ON YOUR LUCK,
"THEY FEAR", YOU MIGHT "ASK" THEM, FOR ONE SIMPLE "BUCK"!

SO, WHEN "YOU", BECOME "NUMB",,,,,,AND YOU'VE TAKEN YOUR "TOLE",
"YOU", WITHDRAW FROM A "PHONE CALL"......"THEY'LL" JUST BRAG OF "THEIR GOAL".

"THE STRESS" MAKE YOU "WEAKER"......"IT'S" LIKE LIVING "DEATH ROW",
"SOME" MAKE IT OUT........BUT "YOU'LL" NEVER KNOW!


SO, LIVE IN THIS "DARKNESS"! THIS "TUNNEL" YOU'VE BUILT!
"DROWN" IN "SELF PITY",
ONLY "YOU'LL" FEEL THE "GUILT"!


NOW,,,I'VE GOT YOUR "ATTENTION", AND IT "PISSES" YOU OFF!
'yOU", THINK I'M "CONDEMNING",,,,,,,,,AND SAYING YOUR "SOFT"!!!

"I'VE" "OPENED", YOUR EYES, "REALITIE'S" HELL!
"BUT" YOU TOOK TIME", TO READ "THIS",,,,,,,,SO WHAT DOES THAT TELL!

GRASP ON TO YOUR "LOSES"! GET BACK WITH YOUR "FAITH"!

"ONLY YOU'LL" MAKE IT "HAPPEN",
"IT'S" NOT DISHED ON YOUR PLATE!!

"IT'S ALL" OUT THERE HAPPENING, "IT'S" PASSING YOU BY!
YOUR'RE NOT GONNA FIND IT, IF YOU "DON'T" EVEN TRY.....


COME "OUT" OF YOUR "DARKNESS"! COME INTO THE "LIGHT",
AT FIRST IT MIGHT BLIND YOU,,,,,,THEN THINGS BECOME "BRIGHT".

"GET OUT"!, START TO "MINGLE", LEAVE "SORROWS" TO "PAST"!
I'M SURE "THEY" WILL "HAUNT" YOU,,,
BUT "MY FRIEND", THEY WON'T LAST.

"THE FEELING OF LIVING",,,,,,FILLING IN ALL "THE GAPS",
"THANK GOD", SOMEONE FOUND YOU! BEFORE YOU "COLLASPED"!

"A SMILE, A HANDSHAKE","KIND WORD", IF YOU COULD,
THEY MAY NOT SOLVE "PROBLEMS",BUT THE "FEELING" IS "GOOD".

"YOU'LL" FEEL "STRONGER" EACH DAY,YOU'LL LEARN HOW TO "COPE",
NOW, ISN'T THIS BETTER? THAN TO JUST GIVE UP "HOPE"?!

"GOOD" THINGS WILL START HAPPENING,"YOU'VE" MADE "YOUR SELF "KNOWN",
"YOU'RE FEELING" ALIVE!,,,,,YOU'RE "NO LONGER ALONE"!

YOU'LL FINALLY REALIZE........YOU DO STILL "EXIST",
AND THE "HELP", THAT IS "OFFERED", YOU'LL NO LONGER "RESIST"!

"YOU'LL" THINK TO YOUR SELF,,,,"HOW DID I SURVIVE"!

"THE GOOD LORD" ABOVE,,,,IS WHY YOUR'RE ALIVE"!

WHEN A "SOUL" BECOMES WEAK,,,,,,,"SATAN" WILL "STRIP",
WHEN "HE" KNOWS "YOU" WON'T FIGHT IT?
IT'S "THEN", YOU WILL "TRIP"!

AND THIS "RUT" THAT YOU "FALL" IN, AS HE WANTS YOU TO BE?
IT'S NOT A "TRIP" YOU WOULD "PLAN" FOR,
"READ" BACK AND "YOU'LL" SEE"!

"BELIEVE" IT OR NOT, I'M "YOUR ANGEL",,,,,,"YOU'LL HEAL",
I'M HERE TO "DIRECT" YOU,,,,,,LET YOU KNOW THAT "GOD'S REAL"!
"I'VE ALSO" BEEN "HEALED", HE "BATTLED" MY CANCER!
"HE" ASSIGNED ME TO "YOU", TO HELP FIND YOUR "ANSWER"!

THERE'S "MANY", THAT "NEED" ME,,,,,,,"SOME" OTHERS "REJECT",
I DO "ALL" I CAN,,,,,,,,TREAT ALL WITH "RESPECT".

"DON'T" "DOUBT A BLESSING", THAT'S SENT HERE TO "YOU",

  JUST TAKE A "MOMENT" TO "THANK HIM",,,,"LET IT KNOWN THAT HE'S TRUE"!!!


                                                                                      CAROLYN LOVE

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Tempestlady commented on "WITHDRAWN, WITH NO HOPE"

07-08-2009

That's a 10 from me! It helped so much. I cannot begin to express how you spoke to me in this work. I am crying as I type this. You are truly a gift! Write on please.....

carol1952

07/09/2009

i'm so sorry, didnt mean to make yu cry! but yes my poems have touched many for they come from my heart,thx my friend,carol

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

carol1952’s Poems (56)

Title Comments
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"MY VISIT TO HEAVEN" 1
"havent a clue" 0
THIS BROKEN DOWN ANGEL 1
"TO BE OR NOT TO BE" 2
"COMPANION" 2
"MY LIFE IN A "NUT" CELL" 2
"FARM LIFE" 2
"COMPUTERS" 3
"WALLS" 2
"RAINBOWS" 3
"CHANGES" 2
"WILL YOU BE READY?" 1
"THE CONNECTION" 2
"THE INTRODUCTION" 1
"THE BASICS OF LIFE" 1
"JUST A LITTLE TALK WITH JESUS" 1
"MISSING YOU" 1
"CINNAMON" 2
"JUST A MATTER OF TIME" 5
"A GIFT FROM GOD" 8
"I BELIEVE"!!! 6
"CAN'T MISS A FRIEND, YOU NEVER HAD!" 5
"USA" 3
"BELIEVE IT OR NOT" 4
"AS THE WORLD TURNS" 4
"FANTASY FROM THE "PASSED" 1
"QUIET PLACE" 2
"SOMETHING FISHY" 4
"LESSONS LEARNED, TABLES TURNED!" 6
"THE JOURNAL" 4
"BORROWED TIME" 5
"YOUR'RE NOT ALONE" 4
"JUST IN TIME" 1
"LIFE" 1
"TIM" 4
"INSANE?" 4
"A WORKING SOUL'S BOOST" 4
"A TRUE BLESSING" 1
"WITHDRAWN, WITH NO HOPE" 1
"GOING HOME" 0
"GONNA PLAY,,,,GOTTA PAY!" 3
"THE TREE" 4
"WEATHER OR NOT"! 1
"MY JOURNEY WITH GOD" 1
"MARRIAGE GONE WILD!" 2
"CHRONIC PLEA" 0
"NOT ALWAYS A "BOX OF "CHOCOLATES!" 1
"THE POWER OF PRAYER" 4
"ADDICTION" 2
"CONFUSED, AND DOWNHEARTED" 2
"ACCEPTANCE" 4
"TWO DOGS DISCUSSING POLITICS" 4
"DOG NAMED BLUE" 1
"POET AND DIDN'T KNOW IT" 2
"9-11-01" 3
"A CRY FOR HELP" 3