• Hate
  • ,
  • Hurt
  • ,
  • Revenge.

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    written for someone specail.....




    I have gone to places you've never been. I have known evil as a friend. Have you? Seen? Done? Thought? No.... I think not.


    The nightmares wake me in the night. You're pretty lives unfilled with knives and blood and shame and rage. I try to walk away.


    But can't. I'm trapped, in my self imposed hell I gasp. Surely this won't last. But it does. You see none of you have ever vowed or


    sworn to do what I must. Patiently I've waited as a spider on the web. Spinning my gossamer. Silver, silent thread. I gorge myself on hate.


    Dreaming of the day when I stand over you dead. Freedom from the curse that you foolishly set in motion years ago. Fool. You will pay for your betrayal.


    Did I not swear to you a solemn oath? Do you feel no fear? You really should as I have waited many years patiently ,as a hunter for his prey.


    You will repay for the life you took someday. And I will go on living as I should. I will feel no guilt, shame , or remorse.


    I hope you live each passing day as your last. The day is drawing nigh. And I am willing to bet you feel it. Stalking you. Watching, waiting, and trembling with rage.


    Do I feel regret? Only that you live.......But that shall be remedied my enemy. Ah yes. Be patient.

    I have. And it will pay off. Wait for me there. Wait for me.


    I will arrive as a thief in the night. Will you know when I've arrived? I feel you will. Wait for me.


    written by Phil G. Inman Sr. 2010

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