rain dance

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    rain dance

     rain dance


    a rainy day
    damp and gray
    wind is blowing
    branches sway
    leaves drip water
    birds sip rain
    lakes get wetter
    umbrellas reign
    inside my place
    holding rein
    against the elements
    I remain
    comfortable glad
    watching through glass
    the wonders of nature
    not much can surpass

    ©    Linda Renzulli

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    GentleT commented on rain dance

    06-23-2009

    Yes sometime the rain also makes me feel lighter. Beautiful artistry of word to paint the picture.
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    featherwriter

    06/24/2009

    Thank you, I''m glad you enjoyed it.

    jademelissa74 commented on rain dance

    06-23-2009

    The magical phrasesarranged to compose this piece are absolutely incredible! A wonderful poem! Thank you for sharing it!
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    featherwriter

    06/24/2009

    You're welcome, and thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it

    kjacobs commented on rain dance

    06-23-2009

    I love this poem. It was a beautiful read. It set a calm comforting feeling within me.
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    featherwriter

    06/24/2009

    Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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