Rain on My Heart

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    Rain on My Heart

    I hear it falling.
    Late at night, while I sleep; in the early morning when I wake.
    The rain on my heart, it consumes me.
    Did you not know the sun runs from my direction?
    My soul does not allow singing birds nor does it welcome them.
    It used to be my friend, I'd love to watch the drops slide down the window as thoughts of my childhood arose.
    Not now.
    Not anymore.
    Rain is always falling on my heart.
    When will the sunshine be let back in?
    That remains a mystery.....

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    charmlessman2d commented on Rain on My Heart

    08-01-2011

    love the imagery of rain falling on your heart. i can hear it pitter patter when i imagine the same. maybe going in unison to the heartbeat? nice. keep writing. whether you neglect it from time to time.

    Kaiprin commented on Rain on My Heart

    12-07-2009

    The sunshine will come back in time. You will find happiness. Who knows, it may find you.

    poetheart87 commented on Rain on My Heart

    11-20-2009

    It's obvious you feel alot of pain. I am so sorry for you. I added this to my faves though. It was an excellent write. Keep on writing!!

    orsonav commented on Rain on My Heart

    07-05-2009

    This is a very good poem concerning the affairs of the heart. You paint a very unique picture through your word choice in this poem. Great write.

    lightcourier commented on Rain on My Heart

    05-19-2009

    nice work. Thanks!

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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