Rain on the Roof

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    Rain on the Roof

    The rain hitting the roof
    I awoke with the sound of applause clapping. With loud crys of laughter roars of thunders rolling off into the distance.
    The thunder didn’t stay it left with a few bangs
     as I lay waiting patiently for more more I want to hear it roar.

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    charscho commented on Rain on the Roof

    05-08-2009

    I am a gemini too, though I don't go for that stuff. But you say you want help. I am also a professional writing tutor and editor, and think I can help you. my address is charscho@yahoo.com.

    bluskyinthenite

    06/25/2009

    thank you very much. Havent BEEN ON THIS SITE MUCH. BUT LOVE HELP.. FEEL FREE TO TEAR MY POEM APART. AND POINT THINGS OUT TO ME. OK...

    writersblock commented on Rain on the Roof

    04-29-2009

    For more, i wait patiently, of this poem.

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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