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    Rain

    I stand in the rain, flesh rotting from the pain.
    I have loved and lived and now its time to be free.
    Free from u the one who hurts me so.  I give you all
    and u take.  never giving in return. 

    The rain surrounds me like a shroud.  A peaceful melting
    of my heart and the sobbing subsides.
    I gave you everything and you returned nothing.

    I forgave u and loved u laughed with you
    cried with u and even felt pride for u.

    You gave nothing.  you saw nothing in me.
    I was just a stepping stone in your search for something new.
    You never believed you were never true.

    I hope u are happy in this life u live.
    while i live in the pain.
    You never know, true love may come with the rain.

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    HiddenAngel commented on Rain

    12-28-2009

    this poem just like yur others touches my heart...

    sk8ergirl commented on Rain

    07-15-2009

    wow that was great and i really enjoy your work. you are a great poet keep it up great write

    Focus commented on Rain

    07-01-2009

    Boy your good and i am going to keep on reading great job i mean it

    Rainz commented on Rain

    07-01-2009

    I feel this pain, from a place deep within my soul, where the lining of a scar was touched by your words. Great work sir!

    Paolo commented on Rain

    06-06-2009

    This poem, a cry of anguish, a very mournful sound brings to us betrayal. I like how you used rain to sew the elements together. The line about "peaceful melting" appears out of sorts with the rest of the vein and I find difficulty in understanding why in some places you use "u" and other, "you", It just seems to diminish what the voice of the poem wants to say.

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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