Rainbow of Tears

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    Rainbow of Tears
    (11.08.2000)
    Smiles burst upon my sadness.
    Oceans happen to know my past.
    The present knows nothing.
    The unknown of the future is gone.
    Stakes withdraw the handle as I lay in the puddle.
    The puddle of wishes that didn't come true and melted from my skin.
    The rush of anger as I know the deception of my sentence of imprisonment for the remainder of my miserable time.
    The dying wolves howl as I cry pain even in my dreams.
    Fullness of the hour, only to be broken onto empty.

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    AdelKernan commented on Rainbow of Tears

    06-20-2009

    This is a beautiful piece of writing. Absolutely. I have hesitated to comment upon your writing in the past because although I really enjoy it, it is often really dark, which makes it difficult for me to talk about analytically. This is simply lovely. There are some incredibly effective lines here: "Oceans happen to know my past" and the final: "Fullness of the hour, only to be broken onto empty" Fucking brilliant.
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    Rhaven

    06/21/2009

    Thank you very much...

    FlyingStorm commented on Rainbow of Tears

    05-06-2009

    Who can make a rainbow? The FlyingStorm man The FlyingStorm can. Strikes with Lightning just as fast as he can. The FlyingStorm man The FlyingStorm can. Who can make a rainbow? The FlyingStorm man The FlyingStorm can. With a Big Bang Boom he will Blow your hand. The FlyingStorm man The FlyingStorm can.
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    lonewolf commented on Rainbow of Tears

    04-29-2009

    loved it!! great job
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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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