Raindrops

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    Kept getting distracted...oh look, a butterfly.

    Raindrops

     Raindrops falling from the sky
    an amazing sight to see.
    They glisten in your hair
    as water covers you and me.
    Raindrops spiraling to the ground
    a peaceful sight to see.
    The rain feels good in so many ways
    how could you disagree?
    Raindrops blanketing the earth
    a calming sight to see.
    We both know it won't last for long
    so we watch until it flees.

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    Teardrops commented on Raindrops

    07-31-2010

    I love the rain and the way everything looks so clean when it goes great poem Marie
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    laurilang5 commented on Raindrops

    07-26-2010

    Sweet, simple and refreshing! Very nice...it seems a happy hopeful poem.
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    angel33614 commented on Raindrops

    07-26-2010

    Such beautiful imagery I can feel the rain as it caresses my my heart and soul with such tranquility and grace! I feel the true message of the poem is carpa diem! seize the day, enjoy the moment as long as it lasts for life is so short and precious. With all the hustle and bustle of the world very few now adays stop and take time to really enjoy life, soak in the special moments that we share, cherish the day while it lasts for night is always nearer than we realize. Beautiful poem my friend, truely inspiring! Makes me want to go sing in the rain right now, lol. Perhaps I see, perhaps I am blind. Purity of the soul, journey well!!! Angel aka The poem buster
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    ShadowStealer

    07/26/2010

    Thank you angel. You all really understand my poem!!! ShadowStealer

    Rhymer commented on Raindrops

    07-25-2010

    I feel the raindrops caressing my face, the coolness washing away lifes worries, excellent vivid write.....
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    kdarcy commented on Raindrops

    07-25-2010

    Quiet moments with nature, seeing all the splendor of all around us ... its all good, well mostly. I like the rain and your easy read, thanks
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