Ramblings of My Mind

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  • ApaqRasgirl
  • Back online after loosing internet for a long time. I am very happy to finally be back with all my friends and I hope to de writing and posting soon. Love Asha

Ramblings of My Mind

Ramblings of My Mind~~~

My mind rambles with the morning sun~~~
Thoughts swirl as if caught in the wind~~~
Trapped inside my mind as day begins~~~

Scrambled thoughts left of a nights dreams~~~
Touched by love they begin to spin~~~
Whirling emotions begin to flow~~~

Down my arm touched with a bit of soul~~~
To my hand down they flow~~~
Ink of emotions fills my quill~~~

On my paper the thoughts will go~~~
Emptying my mind and leave it still~~~
Start all over with evenings chill~~~

Dark as night the black ink does show~~~
Love and tenderness red will flow~~~
My hand rips across as the paper glows~~~

Fueled with emotion ink does flow~~~
Words from my soul keeps its glow~~~

Put down on paper for all eternity ~~~
Where they will show~~~

This heart and spirit will always glow~~~
Words from the soul they all must go~~~

Written by Asha
June 2010
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FranzJ commented on Ramblings of My Mind

07-25-2010

your description is hw I feel when I can't write - I have paper, ink but nothing flows and lately is been bar

ApaqRasgirl

07/25/2010

dont give up my friend, for the words are there, it could be that you are trying to hard, at times when I feel like the words just don't come out, is when I take a tablet and pen to bed with me, for I know the words come out in my dreams and as I am laying quietly trying to go to sleep, they slip in and fill my thoughts, then I grab my pen and just scramble them down, not worrying how they come out at that time, then later, I can take them and create some good poems out of all those mixed up thoughts. dont worry friend, they are there and will come out before you know it. blessings dear loves ya asha

angel33614 commented on Ramblings of My Mind

07-23-2010

Yet another beautiful extension of your inner heart and soul, truely inspiring and insighful!!! I can relate to this one all to well, I thought I was the only one who thought like this, lol. I see I am not alone in the night. It is funny if you ask most poets they would tell you they feel so alone and isolated, that no one truely understands them, yet one thing this site has taught me is that we are more alike than we are different and we are not alone, the words of our hearts and souls connect us, our poetry brings us together... i can relate to this poem in more ways than i can find the words to describe, lol. Ramblings of your mind are the window to your soul, and such a window is beautiful to behold, breath taking!!! Purity of the soul, journey well!!! Angel aka the poem buster

ApaqRasgirl

07/23/2010

thank you even more my dear friend for you have just inspired a new poem building in my heart from the last two lines of your comment here. you have truly blessed my life being one of my dearest friends now. thank you loves ya bunches asha

ginga commented on Ramblings of My Mind

06-06-2010

asha, I love the flowing sensation one gets from reading this lovely piece. ty ginga

gogant commented on Ramblings of My Mind

06-04-2010

Hey Asha, spoken like a true poet.......the mind is our creator and the hand - the purveyor.............Your poem rings with bells of rhyme and glows with words of beauty..............................gogant

DeepEclipse commented on Ramblings of My Mind

06-03-2010

Flood it. Run it. Pour it. Unleash it. Who says madness is useless hahah. Was like watching your mind paint a portrait while its eyes are closed. Yet it still knows what it is doing. Enjoyed the read.

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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